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[Chris and EJ #1]

Notbad

So this was notbad the characters were not too shabby, the music was cool and seemed fitting especially for all the action scenes actually the music really seemed to work well here. the "NEXT-BUTTION" is what I had some issues with you may want to upgrade it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So those buttons so small, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont like that style you can always go back to the other way. But for the mostpart it seems better if it was flowing like a movie without the buttons.

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[Epilepsy Go Away]

Entertaining movie

Well that was a tad short but kind of amusing, so first off I like your little gimmics here made it much more entertaining some nice animation here aswell, You can make this much longer though maybe add some more content into this one somehow, anyways nice animation here even if it is a short one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can make this much longer though maybe add some more content into this one

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #25]

All In a nutshell

So all in a nutshell you have shown us a lot of episodes and here is an example of a brilliant episode, now while some things could be better it was still full of adventure and entertaining value, and I was very highly impressed with all that you have presented here. So as this review comes to a short end, it was a decent flash of good portion, could use more stuff here and there and some smoothing out on some areas, but I thought in the end it was just right and fittng with all that was happening so it was alright with me. So with all that said maybe your next project will be just as good if not better And I have to say birthdays are great even for sergio

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more birthday bashes

~X~

[Chris and EJ #3]

Nice work

I like these because you always seem to make these like a real "MOVIE" this one had a mobster feel to it maybe its always a good pick on the music so props to you on the music choices you do well there, it kind of ran short so you should stretch out the content on this one a little better, but nice flash animation here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
it kind of ran short so you should stretch out the content on this one a little better

~X~

[LOTR IceCream 2]

LOL

These kinds are always somewhat funny with the voice-overs and such, but you need some sort of subtitels for these they are kind of hard to hear so ad some subtitles, but honestly this was pretty entertaining you should make more stuff like this in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you need some sort of subtitels for these they are kind of hard to hear so ad some subtitles

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[The Sergio Show Episode #26]

Amusing in its own way

So here we have another fine episode of sergio and this was pretty amusing in its own way and own style ofcourse, you bring that humor and make it work very well, I actually really like this series and while there is alot of episodes each one is simular but also different in its own way, very nice stuff here. The was certainly an Interesting submission, Well here we come to an end of another flash, and with my closing comments on this, I had some entertaining fun and amusment with this movie. so anyways keep up the great work, I look forward to even more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more adventures that require him to move around more like this one.

~X~

[LOTR helms deep battle 1]

Nice work

And here was some nice animation on this one actually really good animation and I really enjoyed it, It was just kind of on the short side of things so you should really think about adding some more content or something here, a funny and entertaining animation though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more content so make it longer with much more content.

~X~

[Oxford Street Intro]

Cute

And here is a cute little animation. I wish the screen was much larger tho it was kind of small and you may want to stop the looping aswell, but the animation itself was actually pretty cute. I liked the music aswell. just needs a few fixes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the view screen much bigger, it was small and not much you could do in the view screen area you did have so making it much bigger would only be a plus on your part and allow for more enjoyment for the people who checkout the flash. my only issue with this one would be that it would Loop over and over and you could fix that easily with an action script code >> Stop-Action-Code. checkout tutorials on the newground forums if you are unsure how to do a Stop-Action-Code. but for the most part its pretty easy to add, and will only help your flash better, so give it a try. you never know.

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[He's A Nazi]

Amusing

Lol well this was pretty amusing lots of jpegs you could probably ad more art style animation, but I have to admitt this was an entertaining flash animation even if it was political.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I did think you over-used the images like there was tomany of them, and might have been better with some of your own drawings and art, even if it takes some time to do them would show more effort in the end.

~X~

[The Legacy of X-Star]

Nice

This was really cool kind of like a real movie the music played well into this and there was some good action scenes in this, you have made a great lil movie here, wouldnt mind some better characters other then just sticks though, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved characters not just stick characters, and the next scene button should be removed.

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