Funny
The narrating is pretty good, I wouldn mind some subtitles on this not that it needs it or anything but anyways it was a funny video with some good naration, the characters are cute and also amsuing, the jpegs and animation explain the amusing story very well so this was creative on your part, you should make more of these like a series of sorts, but anyways nice work here make more stuff soon.
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you should make more of these like a series of sorts
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