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[Joel Sulston Showreel 2017/18]

Entertaining

So this short movie was pretty short more like a trailer of all your works and that was pretty good, hope to see full projects sometime, Anyways great start to a decent flash. and so I have found that after watching this from the start and all the way thru it was something special, does need some more stuff here and there though. Anyways keep it real.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the full versions.

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[Stickman Can't Fight 10]

Good animation

So this was a good animation you have here some nice elements and a good little story here the animation flowed well aswell what can be improved not sure it was pretty solid work maybe make more of this style of animation so nice job and hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more like this

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[Incident:111a]

A fun short

Well this was a fun short you have here the idea was good and the action scenes are nice and really look good would love more effects in this one an overall good film here and I really like the process of the action so nice work indeed keep up the good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more effects on the action scenes

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[Incident:101A]

Ohmy

Well the joke or not joke got across in this one and there was blood in all the right places some of this was funny other parts kind of brutal but a good work of animation overall I like what you did here so keep up the good work and efforts can't wait for even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood ofcourse

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[Pico Parody X (2010)]

Wow

Ok well first off that was kind of funny, and the "ANIMATION" alone was very impressive so nice work indeed, but really short maybe you can extend this to be longer with more plot and such, I am generally pleased with all this there were a few points thatcould be better, but again those tings can be cleaned up and whatnot,but for starters this was a good entry and hope it all pansout for the best.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
really short maybe you can extend this to be longer with more plot and such

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ToonCastleTV responds:

Hey, thanks for taking the time to review my movie. I am well aware of the flaws and shortness of this movie, but wanted to submit it for fun just because :) I am ready to move on to bigger and better things hopefully in the future ;)

[Cold Cuts-omers]

Cool

Nice little film you have here, the "VOICE" is really good here the narrating is awsome, I really like how you presented this, So apparently I have not seen this before but glad I had a chance to check this one out here, it was Advanced and Wonderfully shown its effort from with in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles but maybe not.

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[Moon Boi]

Well

Well that was rather "SHORT" but was still pretty entertaining, it was "SAD" in its own way but still pretty good if you ask me, just a bit short though. So I like this submission even if it was somewhat differant, so maybe some more Advanced stuff can happen, make it more Enticing and bring out the greatness of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a tad bit longer.

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[Madness WhiteHank Collab]

Nice

Well this was pretty good of a film I like the blood, And do think you actually do need more blood like on the ground and dripping and flying all around that would be a nice effect, But now I just wanted to comment on how I preceived this to start off, and sofar I am pretty intriged by it, so glad to see something good here. Perhaps some little stuff here and there can be tweaked, And there is room for some various ideas of improving on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
do think you actually do need more blood like on the ground and dripping and flying all around that would be a nice effect

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Kenamy responds:

Actually i'm pretty sure i added it on my part, guess it's just gone lol. but i usually adds some, sorry about that.

[Orange Combat: Halloween day (Part 1)]

Entertaining

Well this was a really really short one but it was still pretty entertaining, the characters are ok but could be more rfined and detailed. The animation could have more "PLOT" and dialog to it, more depth in the story, but overall it was a short little film that was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the characters are ok but could be more rfined and detailed. more plot to the story more dialog too.

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[Birdbath 3: The Legend of Fishquatch]

Notbad

Well this was pretty good animation you have here I wouldnt mind some improvement on the birds like more texture and more feathers and such, the voice work here is pretty impressive, and this was a cute little animation you have here, kind of cute even, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish and detail on the birds.

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