XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Phone Wreckers]

Good idea

So this was a good idea for a film here and was kind of funny, So these reviews tend to get boring, but it does allow me to help you optimize it to its best abilities and whatnot, So lets colorsize it with some creativity, you have started off well sofar.

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I would love to see you advance on this maybe make another one with more even to the story.

~X~

[Lost pause animated]

Hhaha great one

Wow I couldnt stop laughing with this one, it was some good animation good humor all around. This does have some Entertainment value and its what kept me interested, it has for sure Earned some credit with me and I find this Discovery to be a Grand one. anyways great stuff here really good humor.

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Honestly it was fine as is.

~X~

[Office Cat]

Cute

Now that was a cute little toon a good "IDEA" about the cat, I really can see you making this into a series of some sort, it has lots of potential, So apparently I had missed this one in the portal but glad I got a chance to check it out and review it, Imagination is everything and you have cleverly brought everything together in good fashion and the content Suited everything alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make an animted series from this.

~X~

[Orange Combat: Halloween day (Part 2)]

Entertaining

Well this was entertaining but some things could be better like some extra "EFFECTS" and such, like the pumnkin heads eyes and mouth could glow more more brighter, The film was short, you should think about adding much more content, making it longer maybe if you dont want to go that rout you could add a combination of short films all together, almost like a portfolio of sorts, but you should do more then just have a really short toon and nothing else.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the pumnkin heads eyes and mouth could glow more more brighter, and this animation was way too short could be longer.

~X~

[Incident:001A]

Awsome again

So this was another awsome animation but then again you always make these great ones and congrats on all the awards so nice very nice visuals and fun animations you push out hope to see more sometime anyways have a wonderful day I know I did watching your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these and much longer

~X~

[Pokemon GO Stickman!]

Kind of different

Well that was kind of different but it was cool and I like this flow of animation even the story was pretty good some good depth and ideas here so nice work here and a good story to bat I look forward to much more from you this was pretty good stuff keep it up

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Good animation and I thought it was fine as is

~X~

[SCF10 trailer]

Scf

So this stickman can't fight was a good series and this entry here as a trailer was kind of nifty I like the style I like the action and there's even some humor in this so that's a plus of things I can't wait to see much more on this it's a brilliant piece and a brilliant animation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A trailer that can't be redone as it's fine as is

~X~

[Hank Hill's Bizarre Adventure]

This was cute

A random adventure for hank hill, I like it. So here was something I tend to like when comming across these kinds of flash works. you have additional content in this one that have made this flash come alive. and I Absolutely adore this Surprisingly interesting submission. You should make more like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more strange adventures of hank hill like this one maybe a series of sorts.

~X~

Stanpai responds:

Thank you for your review! I actually made this as a sort of "pilot" to gauge interest in me making a series like you requested, so yes, if all goes as planned, that's the end goal.

[HardCore Jake]

Entertaining

An entertaining film nice visuals really good storie too, Ok so you have a nice flash here, its kind of like taking a ride into the flash portal, and found your submission and I thought it was a delight, although its just the start I like what you have going on here. Some subtitles might be nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there. and it doesnt have to be much either, even having the option to toggle on or off would even be another nice idea and option for viewers and users playing or watching, just an idea or two. But other then that it would be nice if you had some.

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