XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fatal Portrait]

I like it

Alright so all the stuff you put in this movie reminds me of a good party because you have hosted something interesting and fun, Kind of like a party in the portal and you keep people happy through out, So onto more of the flash now. So now for the film really good animation and love all the different view shots even, you really put some energy into this and good character and story.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything it was pretty brilliant.

~X~

[Assassination foiled]

Dedication

Dedication is key in all flash films or other flash works, and will make a good Victory you have Morphed some simple concepts and ideas into some more advanced options, So my Opening Remarks are just that, this is a good start. Very good 3-d style here but this should have been much longer and you should stop the loop also

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure if this was done in flash but if it was a stop action code would work for the looping if not try and have it end at the end, or something.

~X~

Hidden-Maverick responds:

It's way too advanced to be animated in flash, but yeah.

Thanks anyways!

[Messy Ricky's]

Nice

So visiting the portal is like going to a big casino there are somany slot machines and tables, somany shiny and interesting sounds, And so when I find something like this in the portal it puts a smile on my face because its like I am back in the casino once again. This was entertaining the "VOICE" work was pretty good, I wouldnt mind some subtitles and maybe make this one a bit longer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind some subtitles and maybe make this one a bit longer

~X~

[Exorcist and Demon]

Nice work

Now this was a Refreshing entry and a good Attempt of randomness aswell as bringing a good concept fourth, its a Victory in my book and I like the overused ideas that are enhanced. I like how you started this, your art work is well detailed and this was a fast paced film really good ending too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a series out of these characters.

~X~

Padrian responds:

Thank you for the review! Making a series out of these guys would be really awesome ^^

[the big fight]

That was short

So that was kind of short but was also entertaining, the characters could use some "POLISH" and improved animation more flow of animation with limbs and such, but it was a nice animation, This is the most refreshing hands down flash of the day that I have seen today, And I really like the direction you have started with this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
improved animation more flow of animation with limbs and such, and some improved detail on the characters.

~X~

[The Original Good Hu Boat Commercial]

Cute

This was cute I like the black and white style you have here, and the "SONG" was notbad either a good little short here, So I got some good Entertainment out of this and Surprisingly your Dedication does show thru well on this one, the effort is showing the time and work put in, So I am pleased with how this starts out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make more of these and put them together.

~X~

GruntVonVeizatun responds:

Thanks! This was actually based on a real commercial hence why it was so short. Also this was pretty much hand drawn and I mainly focus on puppetry. But I do want to try and make longer animations. Thank you for the constructive criticism. :)

[Therapy Dog - 8 - Small Talk]

Nice

As always nice work, your character work is great and this was pretty funny, so nice job with that, Now this is the type of flash that someone could fall head over heels with, not saying I have but this was something different and I like the style this flash has been heading in, there was some interesting creativity through out this flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was fine as is.

~X~

[Axis and Allies (4/16)]

Wow

Wow I have to say wow because this was a beautiful piece of work and good story base too I think the story was my fave and the action was good animation flowed well and all came through well with some nice flow of a film so keep making stuff like this it's entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more to this

~X~

[Wezz and Nettz I]

Nice

So this was cool and this was a nice visual you have here I like the style here and even the idea was pretty decent l think you could have extended the action scenes just a little but overall this was pretty good stuff and hope you would make more sometime overall a good film

~X~