XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Project I.V.]

Nice

So you seem to do well at everything and this frame by frame is good very smooth if you ask me and the action was notbad and I liked it so no changes on this beautiful piece of work here very good infact and hope one day you make more like this so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more fbf stuff

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[Game Grumps Animated: Kinky Devil]

This was ok

So wish this was a tad bit longer but it was pretty decent if you ask me some nice animation and was a little confused a bit but overall it was entertaining, my suggestion is to make it a little longer anyways cant wait to see what else you have planned for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it longer.

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[Barney Meets His Maker]

Amusing

So that was an amusing little toon maybe too short if you ask me, the art was very nice and the animation was pretty decent, I do think adding more to this might make it a little better but overall this was a nice piece you have here, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more to this it was pretty entertainbing.

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[Life in Slow Motion]

Wow nice

So that was really good the story-line is great the characters and animation even better and the "VOICE" work is very impressive I really like the style of animation here and love the story this is something I could really find myself getting into its like a good book.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of this and adding subtitles wouldnt hurt.

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Kel-chan responds:

I would but too many other projects. Though I might get back into it in the future. I started teh 2nd ep but its not done.

[Zelda: Just A Small Key (ANIMATION)]

Wow amazing

Now this was really good and Im an instant fan on this one, the graphics are really good and the animation is pretty good, zelda was a great game and this animation is just as good, very good voice work too, I think you can make a whole series from this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you can make a whole series from this one

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[Hanzo's dragons]

Intense

So this was pretty intense, I love the action scenes here and all the different crazy scenes, that ending with the fart was just very funny haha anyways I would suggest to make this longer for sure, it was entertaining atleast high action and amusing humor.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to make this longer for sure

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[pkmn generations]

intriging

pokemon at its best, Wow, it's not often that you stumble across a flick that's so intriging like this one you have here. This really makes me want to go back and think and check this one out again, this is something that I would suggest to friends to see. Some portions I wasnot too fond of, But you had Substantial positive stuff aswell, so nice efforts I like what you are doing here. anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have been nice if you had some dialog on this with the pokemon

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[M-Candy: Coffee Rush]

Wow crazy

Wow I have to say that was pretty crazy it was somewhat short but not too much but the film itself was pretty crazy it was a good animation though and kept me excited so nice job indeed on this one, kind of entertaining hope you make more entertaining animations like this in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no major changes needed here.

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[The 5 stages of Work Loss]

That was good

A good story here real life experiences seem to come alive much better on flash animation, but you did a really good job re doing this and was pretty amazing so nice work here, I love the story and the ending was perfect verywell done animation you have here, you should make more like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just make more.

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[Bad Dream Jam]

Interesrting

So this was somewhat interesting

I like the whole dream scene but seems too short you should have took it into some other elements and more longer, also the looping you should fix so if its a flash program maybe a stop action code but if not im not sure, anyways nice animation here keep making more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and the looping maybe fix that too.

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CroDavid responds:

I am trying to improve but i still dont know the best things to add to my animations. I will try what you recommended. Thank you for the criticism! :D