XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bad Dream Jam]

Interesrting

So this was somewhat interesting

I like the whole dream scene but seems too short you should have took it into some other elements and more longer, also the looping you should fix so if its a flash program maybe a stop action code but if not im not sure, anyways nice animation here keep making more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer and the looping maybe fix that too.

~X~

CroDavid responds:

I am trying to improve but i still dont know the best things to add to my animations. I will try what you recommended. Thank you for the criticism! :D

[Little Brother]

Notbad

So this was notbad this was pretty cool, I like the voice work here it works well and This is the third film of yours I have seen sofar and have to say that this was actually pretty good I like your animations, I do wish these had some subtitles though, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish these had some subtitles though

~X~

[Trust]

Short

Well that was not too bad it was actually pretty good, the visuals of the animation was pretty good very smooth and flowed so well I was really impressed with all the elements here, so nice work indeed, wish it was longer though, anyways nice effort on this movie here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish it was longer though

~X~

[FILM QUEST - Episode 1]

Really nice

The action scenes in this are really intense, very nice "VISUALS" aswell you really bring out the detail in characters and even the action scenes so nice effects all around, you should make more of this I would for sure review more of your work, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of this its awsome.

~X~

[Sonic Seconds: Volume 5]

Very good movie here

I like the animation here and glad you made another film here the graphics are pretty good, This Leaps into action, I thought this was a very nice submission! The coolest part about it was probably how well everything was set up. You got a great sense that you were in a world with a lot of nifty ideas and such. There was Substantial possitives in this and thats what I really have enjoyed about it all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very nice film no changes needed as it was pretty fantastic

~X~

[The 3 Little Bastards]

Cute

This was pretty cute and very funny, I really love how this is old style and the music really plays a big role in that basicly like an old black and white silent film, but you did a really good job on this piece, so keep making these types they are very good indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes on this fun animation.

~X~

studiodenny responds:

hey! sorry for the late response, I havent been on here in ages. Thanks for the kind review and for the 4 stars!

[Pmation: "Spin There, Done That"]

Very Commendable

A Very Commendable piece here you have submitted for us these are just very brilliant and they bring alot to the for front the animation flows like water the embark one takes on these epsiodes are just fun and pretty amazing animating so props to you on the hard work here. I will get this started by saying this was not awful infact it was pretty decent, it had some odd moments but had some decent moments aswell, but in the end it all made sense and made for an interesting flash here, So as I end this review here in abit, I admit that it grew on me as I watched thru it a few times, and it was interesting thats not to say that it does need some work though, some little tid-bits here and there could be cleaned up and added, even some obvious points that could be made better, So my Closing Remarks are its good but can be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
much more flashy effects would be nice.

~X~

[Thrift Video Episode 1 - "Welcome Aboard!"]

Notbad

Cant say I have seen much of these but this was actually pretty enetertaining I like the visual here as it was different and you have some good characters here, and some nice jokes in a way I like the randomness of it all its a good little film you have here and I personally hope to see more of this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more of these, and longer.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #98]

Inspiration

I can only imagine where you do get the inspiration for this one and all the epsiodes you make, because these are pretty good and I can only imagine the ideas you have planned for future episodes, Sergio always upto some funny busness, and then theres the little sister lol, you bring some funny characters, I like how this one turned out. This Animation It was alright, It is certainly better than a lot I've seen in my time on this website, and is better then I had expected from this submission, and feeling more lively would have been a major improvement here. Well I am pretty suprised i was glad that this was better then I had expected, and I do hope to see more from you this was agood all aroundsolid flash entry and hope to see more of this type so keep up the good work, Overall this was a good flash asmentioned, you kept the Momentum up and had some Enhanced details that really made it stand out, so nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More creative ideas and random ones aswell more humor and jokes aswell.

~X~