Wow nice
You have some good "NARRATING" the voice work is really amazing here the "SUBTLE" animation is pretty nifty and fitting with the naration, you did a very well done job here, I wouldnt mind a few flashy effects now and then but besides that this was cool, Anyways great start to a decent flash. and so I have found that after watching this from the start and all the way thru it was something special, does need some more stuff here and there though.
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I wouldnt mind a few flashy effects now and then but besides that this was cool
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