XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pmation: "Never A Doll Moment"]

Envision

And here are all thes types of characters and all sorts of funny animation some of the best animation I have seen in a long time I have really come to enjoy this piece though, you have some nice ideas and you show off the talent here on this one and im impressed, Another good entry here, it was pretty interesting and there was some interesting visuals and some ok content, I thought there was some initial things that could have been better with some more detail, I suppose there is alot that could be made better, but overall I enjoyed it, but anyways you have some good Material here hope the rest of your endeavors prove to be as good. So not much more to offer in the review except that I hope you keep up the positive efforts and good work, I really enjoyed what you had to offer in this one, and look forward to even more of what you can offer in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some more random elements even taking them off the page and onto a desk would be something different

~X~

[The Silly Bird Song]

Very smooth

So how do I start this off, first ill start by saying you do have some nice submission and some nice visuals all around and I really got a kick out of this whole piece, so nice effort there, And there was alot in this wich I really liked, This did have a Ritzy feel, But does need a Turbo Charge touch up here and there, maybe even make it Cutting Edge. very nice work the music alone was very nice, it seemed kind of short though, onlything I would do would be to make it longer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer

~X~

sketchysquirrel responds:

Hey thanks for your encouragement and critique... I really appreciate it!

[Comfortable]

Different

Well this was pretty different i think it was cool how you have presented this but I did find it pretty entertaining and a nice style you have here on this one, some more visual and fancy effects would be pretty cool but thats just one idea for what you do have is pretty good though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some effects to the character maybe more color etc.

~X~

CapaciousSpace responds:

thanks friendo. the more that come out, the more experimental they might get B)

[Pmation: "That Sinking Feeling"]

Imagery

the Imagery is very good here meaning some nice visuals and these kinds of animations are great but you really bring some nice and smooth animation to it and make it work with all the wacky ideas, and the whole random factor also makes this one a fun one aswell, Now as I get this started the one thing that i want to say first is that this is a decent Concept and you should keep up with that, and you have cleverly used some nice effects and elements to make this a good flash submission, There are some areas of improvment but that comes hand and hand, but for this I really liked how you got this going, very nice work here. So I have enjoyed your work here today and hope to see more of it in the comming future, if you keep making stuff like this and keep improving on stuff I will ofcourse be right there to enjoy it aswell, so nice effort you have here. There was a few instances where you could make things better but we will discuss improvments later, but anyways great stuff sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love to see some different things happen and changed up i like the style but something different now and then wouldnt hurt.

~X~

[Ziggytron]

Nice

So here is something with your own personal touch and I love that about artists who add there own personal touch so props to you on a good creative submission. this was cool the animation was really good but this was somewhat kind of short maybe stretch it out a tad more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a tad bit longer

~X~

[GMSU 04-05-18]

Entertaining

So these are pretty entertaining, I like the narative style here, the diferant visuals are pretty entertaining and nice to see something different, I am thinking if you ad some subtitles, it would be pretty cool, some nice little animation you have here with modern day content.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some subtites would be cool.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #111]

Brilliant piece you have presented here

Yes another Brilliant film you have presented here this one was extra funny with the different things going on and I got a few chuckles with this one and am pretty amused withe ach scene that comes thru from point to point, I am pretty happy with what you have going on in this series and I look forward to even more, This was a really cool submission, While not as good as some other stuff, it's still very nice to look, So it was a good Discovery There was various strong points some weaker points aswell, You have some good content and Material here on this flash and made it all worth the while, Later I will Recommend some ideas but thats later and only if it needs them. Overall this was a good flash submission, there was some Enhanced details that made this worthwhile and you gave it some good momentum, and it kept me interested so you did have the right stuff and such, Now dont get me wrong there is still plenty of room for improvments and more enhancments but for the time being its pretty good I thiught.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe just work on the audio issues that come and go at times.

~X~

[The Sergio Show Episode #110]

Awsome as always

Yes indeed awsome as always, its just something about this series that just keeps on going, and while these are still early parts of the show you vring a fun element of suprise and sergio is always a blast with his kind of humor, and all the guests and interactions with props and such very nice work indeed. You have brought your A-Game with this flash and it shows. This is one of the coolest Flash-works I have seen on here in a good while, This gave off a really stylistic tone to it. I appreciate the literally cool world you made here in this one. you have good Material, and i hope you have many more great endeavors like this one. Ok so with This and that said here on a few things, I came to find that this submission was kinda nifty, But generally I found it to be a worth while of a flash movie, and I can see how you have put your efforts across the boards, and hope to see even more from you as this was a pleasent flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the audio was in and out again.

~X~

[The KillerBater Headshot!]

Different

Well that one was different and it was kind of funny and enetertaining not sure what to think but you could improve on the visuals a bit like graphics and more smoother details of the characters and even backrounds but other then that this was kind of entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could improve on the visuals a bit like graphics and more smoother details of the characters and even backrounds

~X~

RedeyestheSecound responds:

Thanks for the tip !

[Miо̄]

Very cool

An interesting flick submission you have here, Now I cant say that I have liked everything here but you really brought out some nifty and interesting aspects of this and made it much more enjoyble then I had originally expected, so for that nice work, There was no real Disinterest at all, infact I think its Unanimous that this was a welldone piece of work. A very good animation here the girl has a good story with her.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught it was fine as is.

~X~

PixelPenn responds:

Hey thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)