XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hock]

Cute

So this was a "CUTE" animation I really liked this little duck here, very funny and the big "RED" button was notbad either all very entertaining, I do think you could have made this longer maybe some new scenes and whatnot, but overall this was entertaining ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer

~X~

[June Bug]

Really cool

So this was really amazing I love this "ANIMATION" you make it dark yet make it funny with little moments like the "BLINKING" skull and the cute music really refreshing videos you have here and love the "VIBRANT" colors that you ad onto these they are very refreshing indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A nice style of color and amusing humor it really does not need anymore changes.

~X~

ChutneyGlaze responds:

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[Deadline]

Refreshing film

wo this was a really refreshing film and that "MUSIC" was just perfect gave me a real uplifting mood so in a way this film put me in a good mood so nice effort and you have some nice "ENERGY" in this, As a tip of improvment not sure but for sure make more of these even some dialog would be cool, Its sort of like taking a stroll into the portal, and finding this delight of a flash or film, But as I did find your sunmission I was pleased with this especialy how this starts out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As a tip of improvment not sure but for sure make more of these even some dialog would be cool

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[URAMESHI]

A good film you have here

This was really "SHORT" but I guess that was the intent, you have some good characters, I would ad some subtitles on this one just as an extra feature or something, Building Film goodies and preserving quality film content thats what you have done here and your hard work is paying off, So I do like what you have done here and props to to you on that, I love that this one won some awards that was very well deserving and the content really shows off the work and time you must have put into it so nice job all around on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad some subtitles on this one just as an extra feature or something, and maybe it could be stretched out to be a tad longer.

~X~

[Metroid: Endless Struggle]

Good toon here

This was alot better then I thaught it might be what I like most about this is that its like a real "CLIMATIC" film, and with all the differennt view shots kept me wanting more, the "MUSIC" was really fitting too so nice job here, and while there could be some polish this is an older flick and may not have a file after all this time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes

~X~

[fuck eminem]

Ha

Well what can I say this was an interesting piece of animation not much more then the "HAND" flipping off emminem onlything with that is that he probably never seen this lol, I will admit I was not a fan of his at first but he grew on me, anyways I would ad more then just the hand more scenes more reason why you dont like him, anyways nice entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad more then just the hand more scenes more reason why you dont like him

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[Drew the Short Straw]

Entertaining

Some nice film work here especially for "CLOCK-DAY" this was an interesting one love the black and white theme here and you added some color very cool, I think you should have had "SBC" colored and the rest in black and white, but other then that this was amusing and funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have had strawberry clock colored and the rest in black and white

~X~

[Clock Day '18]

Cool

This is the "NON-VERSION" I saw and reviewed the "RETRO" version a bit ago but this is really a good film just the visuals and skelitons with the most fitting music was just right on, would have liked if this was longer maybe a few more extra scenes with the skellies, anyways nice clock day film.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have liked if this was longer maybe a few more extra scenes with the skellies

~X~

[Therapy Dog - 10 - Getting Mugged]

LOL

Lol well this is something funny, I love the little sayings by the "DOG" I think some added subtitles would make this a great animation, its already a great one as is, good voices great dialog here, So you have a little something here and a little something there and added some decent creativity that actually goes a long way so a good start indeed, I like what I have found here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some added subtitles would make this a great animation

~X~

[Animation Experiment]

Nice visuals here

Wow this was really intense and I really love the shadded and black and white style you have here, there was a few "SCENES" and I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles, But you do have a very unique and different entry here so nice work hope to see more just like this, So breathing some new life into an old style of film seems to always work for the best just like you have done here, and its all working out for the best, so lets keep that aspect up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles

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PatrickDomingo responds:

Thank you Very much XwaynecoltX ill try to added scenes and dialog next time
Thank you very much for this tips its really helpful :)