XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Bravest Knight]

Nice story

I like this this was actually a pretty good story here it seemed like it could be longer though, maybe more to the story but I do like the animation and each scene it plays into its a decent submission you have presented here, so nice work indeed hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
t seemed like it could be longer though, maybe more to the story but I do like the animation

~X~

[Bad Dream]

Entertaining

Well this was entertaining the character work is pretty good, the "EFFECTS" in the backround are pretty nifty, I think if you added some subtitles in that would be a nice little added feature not needed but would be a nice addition to this fun film of yours.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added subtitles would be nice.

~X~

ToddCircle responds:

Ok thanks :-D
I didn't know subtitles in music videos were a thing so...... subtitles now added

[Shroomy Chaos / Paranoia]

Nice animation

wow this was really nice I love how smooth this animation is you have some nice view point here, the color the different scnes was really nice work, so I was really impressed with this piece, Onlything I would suggest on this piece might be adding some more scenes and making this longer, but it was a decent film here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything I would suggest on this piece might be adding some more scenes and making this longer

~X~

[Homework in a nutshell]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I like the idea here doesnt seem to be much animation on this one though, and thats something you could work on a bit more animation more scenes etc, that would really make this whole piece alot better, but the idea you have on this one is pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more animation.

~X~

[Speed Paint | Pets On Their Own]

These are cool

Well I have to say that these speed pain types are really cool, and I like the music that you added here it was really fitting on this one, it really made for a good piece of film, the style at wich you make this is pretty good, also like that you ad different music even, so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these types they are pretty cool.

~X~

FunCartoons responds:

Thanks =)
We always try to improve our art =)

Have you watched the official trailer of this cartoon ?

[Dirty Dick]

A strange one

So I have to say this was a "STRANGE" one the art was ok but could be polished the animation was notbad but could also be more smoother the "CONTENT" was notbad but it is more random to be honest overall this was a decent little animation you have here keep up the interesting animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the art was ok but could be polished the animation was notbad but could also be more smoother

~X~

JunkYardAnimations responds:

Appreciate the review!! +

[Sonic Seconds: Volume 3]

Lots of action in this one

Very nice animation here the "CHARACTERS" are really well done the flow of animation is really smooth, really good story here too, overall a good animation if you ask me, I like your work and hope to see more from you sonic is always a fan fave so nice work once again.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would maybe ad some subtitles but only as an extra option for viewers.

~X~

[Pico's Sushi Party (unfinished but enjoyable)]

Wow nice

Wow this was really cool, I love how the animation was very smooth in this one, it was nothing short either, but you have a nice animation wish all of it was in color but I will say congrats on the awards that was pretty nice work here, anyways keep up the great animations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Full color would have been nice.

~X~

[Disintegration Meme]

Amazing visuals

I have to say is that this has some amazing visuals right from the start and the "MUSIC" was just right, but why so short that was just very short, I still found it good quality but seems like you could have done more with it, or maybe ad a whole bunch of small clips in one flash entry, regardless this was pretty entertaining. It being so short you should do one of two things, and that would either make the flash much longer or add other short flicks along with it so that there is a variaty of short films and not just the one thats so short. This would help viewers enjoy your flash works alot better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above it could be longer.

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AguRex responds:

Hai... Thanks a lot. I just did it super fast because I haven't uploaded in a while.

Thanks for the advice.
It's helped me a lot.