XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clock Day '18]

Cool

This is the "NON-VERSION" I saw and reviewed the "RETRO" version a bit ago but this is really a good film just the visuals and skelitons with the most fitting music was just right on, would have liked if this was longer maybe a few more extra scenes with the skellies, anyways nice clock day film.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have liked if this was longer maybe a few more extra scenes with the skellies

~X~

[Therapy Dog - 10 - Getting Mugged]

LOL

Lol well this is something funny, I love the little sayings by the "DOG" I think some added subtitles would make this a great animation, its already a great one as is, good voices great dialog here, So you have a little something here and a little something there and added some decent creativity that actually goes a long way so a good start indeed, I like what I have found here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some added subtitles would make this a great animation

~X~

[Animation Experiment]

Nice visuals here

Wow this was really intense and I really love the shadded and black and white style you have here, there was a few "SCENES" and I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles, But you do have a very unique and different entry here so nice work hope to see more just like this, So breathing some new life into an old style of film seems to always work for the best just like you have done here, and its all working out for the best, so lets keep that aspect up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles

~X~

PatrickDomingo responds:

Thank you Very much XwaynecoltX ill try to added scenes and dialog next time
Thank you very much for this tips its really helpful :)

[When You Need A Helmet]

Wow amazing

Wow this was some really amazing work the "VISUAL" alone is intense with these machines rolling around, and the "MUSIC" played a good role into this, a very nice film indeed, So as I do start this one up there could be additional details here and there, but you did have a good Entertainment level, and Surprisingly enough it was certainly a win to start off with.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these for sure especially with all the effects.

~X~

[The Music of Erich Zann]

Im an instant fan

Wow I am loving the "BLACK-WHITE" style here I was sad that this was so short though this has a deep vibe about it and looks like it can be a deep series if you make one from it, my advice is to make a series from it, So I will start my Opening Remarks on that thsi film has Earned points by me for the effort and time put in on this one, you Focus on the efforts and it will be some good Entertainment for all to enjoy.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my advice is to make a series from it

~X~

Cthulhuzann responds:

Good news/bad news. Bad news: it's not going to be a series. Good news: It's a much longer short! Stay tuned.

[Psycho-Analyze Me, Please]

Entertaining

Great characters as always you sure do put some energy into these the "VOICES" are really good wich brings me to one idea that some subtitles could be added not that it needs it or anything but its more of an extra feature for the viewers, Alright so This type of film is not as big as you may have wanted but you did pack it with lots of nifty things and you made it interesting, And I like your approach.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles could be added not that it needs it or anything but its more of an extra feature for the viewers

~X~

[Short Attention Spam]

Nice

So this was a nice film here I like the black and white scenes here and some nice "VOICE" work even, you have some funny jokes with these phone calls, I suggest you make more films like this like a series of different calls and such, So my Attempt here will be to give a good review, while never perfect as the film itself is a good idea, you Morphed different ideas and Surprisingly the Dedication has come through for you.

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I suggest you make more films like this like a series of different calls

~X~

[GET UGLY]

Crazy

Well I can see why this one was so good that last "SCENE" with the money being thrown at her was just priceless and the money shot lol good art here nice voices and great very well executed joke, I wouldnt change a thing on this one other then adding some texture and more shading in the characters colortones, So ofcourse theres additional work that can be put in but apparently you have put in some good effort in this one, So I Encourage you to keep that style up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt change a thing on this one other then adding some texture and more shading in the characters colortones

~X~

[DevilSlayer V-2]

Nice film

So here was a nice little gem find I thaught it was pretty good the story was the main part here and that really made it work well so props to you on a great story you have here it was pretty awsome I have to also say the graphics we're pretty smooth too very well done and an awesome piece indeed so keep doing what you do because this is awesome stuff

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[BEEBO Part 10]

Another beebo

Another beebo wow didn't think there would be anymore of these I remember the originals back in the day and some funny stuff as was this one you have braught so many memories back to visual so anyways nice episode nice flow of animation and just a fun charchter to watch and great series on top of that I look forward to much more of this if you are still making them they are awesome

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