XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[EFN Episode 3: Purpose]

Love the story

So this was pretty good I really love the "STORY" here on this one it also has some really nice "EFFECTS" and view points, you really know how to bring the story alive in this one, there is no major changes that is needed in this one as you have presented a very good story and animation to go along with it, so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is no major changes that is needed in this one as you have presented a very good story and animation to go along with it

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[Wool E]

Cute

So this was a "CUTE" idea I like this little robot he actually made the animation more exciting and entertaining, but then it just ended, That was very short and guess thats cool for some people more depth of the story like one idea might be have the robot chase the character all around town maybe misshaps here and there just an idea but making it a tad longer wouldnt hurt would make it more exciting to see more scenes and action ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above

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[School 13 - I H8 X-MAS]

Nice film

So this was pretty good of a "FILM" I like the idea of the subtitles but they flow too fast maybe you could slow down each scene and whatnot that could be a small improvment on things, but overall this was a good submission with funny moments and good characters so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the idea of the subtitles but they flow too fast maybe you could slow down each scene and whatnot that could be a small improvment on things

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[Unprecedented]

Very entertaining

Alright this one has to be some of your better works as it has some longer moments improved "ANIMATION" the the animation itself is not choppy so it was all a plus and I can see some creativity was used in this one as it jumps to some different scenes with some wild moments but thats what I enjoyed about this piece here so nice work and hope you keep making entertaining films like this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really there was nothing to improve on this one it had everything and was a fine film.

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[Rebooting The Madness]

Nice action

so there was some nice action in this one, it gets started right away the "FLOW" of animation was really nice the "DETAILS" and nifty backrounds was really nice work some good creatures in this film even so I was pretty impressed with all of the outcome, really dont see any need for any changes on this film its a fantastic entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
really dont see any need for any changes on this film

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[Pet Store Party]

Nice animation

so this was good a nice little animation here I like your style here and think if you added some flashy effects here and there in specific moments it would be nice, and maybe even adding some "SUBTITLES" wouldnt hurt either, just an idea or two but a good animation you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was not hard to understand, but it would be a nice option to have some subtitles, gives the flash just that bit more effort, and incase anything was missed you have the text right there. and it doesnt have to be much either, even having the option to toggle on or off would even be another nice idea and option for viewers and users playing or watching, just an idea or two. just something to think about.

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[Happy Death Day]

This was cute

Well this was kind of cute I think it was short though and that may have been the intent, but I do have to say that this was still cute and a good animation even as short as it was love the soothness of it all and cute characters, you should make more like this. alright so notbad on this one, This was notbad and gave off a few laughs but the only thing is it ended too short and the whole toon was over before it started, So instead of just one short piece, you can add other short toons, so that its not such a waste and besides that would bring in alot more quality to your work, and you can showcase more of your work besides just the one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above. make it longer or make many short ones.

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[Watch the bells!]

This was cute

Well I have to say is that this is pretty cute, I like the animation here and the "VOICE" was pretty cute aswell, the visuals are nice and an overall funny toon you have here but it was kind of short so if anything I would suggest some improvment on making it a tad longer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer if you can, seems funny enough to have more to it.

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