Haha nice
So this was "COOL" you sure do come up with some nice "VOICE-NARATING" this one was pretty funny, no changes needed unless you think about adding some subtitles, You have some good skills here i would love to see more of them Creative skills to really push this over the edge. anyways nice entry you have here.
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no changes needed unless you think about adding some subtitles
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