Nice
so the story part of it was decent wish there was more animated points in each frame and subtitles would be a nice ad on, And as I write these words I find it even more interesting as the submission continues on, So good effort shown and I am really liking the focus You put forward I really liked the effort you put in this one an awsome job indeed, Well I'm not the biggest fan of these types but this is a rather Interesting one, I thought it would be something tottally differant but boy was I wrong, I thought this was a pretty good entry in its own right.
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wish there was more animated points in each frame and subtitles would be a nice ad on
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