Amazing
So first of all the scene with the narrating or the whole film I mean is a great Idea I may suggest adding some subtitles, So as I sit here and get ready to write this extended review, I am already decided that you have put some decent effort and you gave some good Focus to alot of this and in trying to make it really good, inwich I think you have acomplished. so from start to finish I was amused and entertained, keep up the good effort and good style. Now dont get me wrong I did enjoy this and had fun with it.
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I may suggest adding some subtitles
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