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[iSCREAM]

LOL

Well this was kind of interesting might be cool if there was more in the backround and the view screen was a tad larger or bigger, but for what it is, its pretty entertaining stuff.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
more in the backround and the view screen was a tad larger

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[The Cosmic Freeway S02EP01 The Hugh Mungus]

Love it

Do I love the whole ship and outter space view points here the voice was ok but was hard to hear at times, So how to start this off, it was interesting for sure, Perhaps later some adjustments and changes for the better could be put in place, but for what it is, its not a bad piece of movie works, and I would love to see more of this style, you seem to have some skill in making these, This is something I would Recommend to other with interest of this kind of content. To Produce something like this does take work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the voice was ok but was hard to hear at times

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HarisTheGodBear responds:

Thank you for the amazing feedback. The voice thing is a problem for me, but I'm trying to work it out. I'll have this figured out by the next episode. Please feel free to share this with others, I love getting real feedback.

[Ball]

Pretty good

Haha this was funny and entertaining love the action between the two characters here, some added backround would have been nice here and maybe some more clips of the characters fighting and such, anyways great stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some added backround would have been nice here and maybe some more clips of the characters fighting and such

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[No Mutt November]

A cute animation

Well that was pretty quick of an animation, the animation was smooth just kind of short, so my suggestion would be to make it a tad bit longer, but besides all that this was funny stuff.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
could be longer

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[The Forbidden Jutsu]

Really nice

I am loving the action here especially the lincoln-ish characters you could ad some nice subtitles on this film, Well so its not all the time you see movie works like this especially in a movie form so I was actually suprised with how you presented this and how you let it flow from start to the end, So in that aspect of things it actually does get off to a decent start. Anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good movie submission, There could be some small changes but overall this is a decent entry you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad some nice subtitles on this film

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[Paper Bunny]

LOL

A cute little animation the wind is a nice idea almost feel like you could have made this go even longer maybe some extra scenes chasing the clothing and such, nice animation you have created.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
could use more funny scenes

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yarharcannon responds:

Yo thanks for the constructive review!
I've omitted the information that this was a university assignment that had to be a short loop no longer than 10 seconds, but I still really appreciate receiving proposed ideas on how I could improve and expand on it. Thanks!

[The Leaked Ending of Friday Night Funkin]

Entertaining

Lol well while short it got to the point some nice characters just a few couple of scenes made this funny as the joke did hit well so great dark art styles and entertaining humor so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
none

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[Sock Six]

Very intense

Well as always you have created something of great quality and different I certainly Have found that this entry was good, entertaining but most of all it kept me wanting to see more, not for the quality but because it was a little something differant then most of the other movies that do come thru here, so I do like that you have put the efort to not be the same but change it up abit. This was a refreshing Concept And I had lots of fun with it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Its top notch stuff doesnt need any changes

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