((( NEEDS LOTS OF WORK )))
Hmmm when i got back from getting a soda i thought i would just hit play after it loaded, but it was in the middle of the movie, so i would suggest add a propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons, aswell as a "STOP-ACTION CODE" so that the film does not loop over and over, as for the "ART" well it was sloppy and didnt show much detail, add some shades more detail within the faces, "ANIMATION" Well make better use of your characters like when they are "WALKING" more limb animating, and now woth "SOUND" you need some may it be sound/FX or just some backround music, well it was a silly flash but needs lots of work....
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