XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Motion IPOD]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, but could be better, it sorta hurt my eyes at first with the close up and far away images but sorta neat i supose, the color tone was different aswell, nice flash, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could add a few different colors for change, the "RED" text was hard to read maybe black would be better, and make some animated characters instead of short clips of people and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A different sorta flash, abit bland and could use more effort, it was interesting though, keep it up...

~X~

[Little Fight!]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was entertainingm the "STICKS" did seem abit small though, and i have seen this style of flash, kinda neat, but it could use a different style to it, nice fight though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well the white backrounds were abit basic, maybe even adding some "COLOR" or even like brick walls, it would make it overall better...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun basic fight flash with tiny sticks, nice job its entertaining...

~X~

[Android X-19]

((( VERY SMOOTH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey this was very smooth looking, the "SHINE" on the metal claws at the start was really neat, and this flash was very sleep and sharp and awsome job with smooth animation, you should make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much really its perfect as is, make more episodes though...

~~OVERALL~~
A very sharp and smooth animation, awsome graphics, must see by all...

~X~

Creative-Brain responds:

thank you ! and nah i don't like making series flashes.

[Intorelably Cute Violence]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This did make me chukkle abitm and i liked the B&W, and i liked that you added some red in there, seemed abit short though, still a cute funny short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more clips, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
A cute flash short of Black and white, could use more to it, but still an entertaining flash, nice short...

~X~

[Starwell ep4: Tired]

((( ANOTHER EPISODE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny, episode, abit short, but funny, and i love the characters even if they stand still most of the time, and some awsome voices behind them, maybe make them longer next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer episode, more animation from the characters, and more different scenes aswell, i also noticed the flash just started playing and there was no "RE-PLAY" button at the end, nore "PLAY" button at the start, might want to add them propper buttons...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny episode, of yellow creatures, with some great voicing behind it, nice job...

~X~

[Hitler]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
It had a good start but then sorta just ended, you actually did a nice job on the "CHARACTER" but the flash almost seems unfished, but it looks like you have something there just needs more detail and effort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters, more shading and detail on backrounds and the character...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny start to a promising flash...

~X~

[Piclown-o-Rama!]

((( HAHA MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad except for the "FLASHING" and anoying "SCREAM" i hought the smiles were decent you could make a series with all thouse different characters and such...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well lose the creepy sounds and the flashing was abit much so you could lose them aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
A strange flash and somewhat creepy, the faces will make you think for sure...

~X~

[Poopswing]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny and gave me a few chuckles, it did seem abit un-finished, the poop flying was abit disturbing but still entertaining, you should finish it though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backrounds could use some animated props, such as some moving clouds, maybe a bird or two, a dog running around...

~~OVERALL~~
An unfinished poop flying something funny stuff...

~X~

[Return of the joint]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha the ending was most funny, a perfect ending if i ever saw one, the flash seemed abut short but was entertaining, the characters were ok, and the animating was decent, nice starwars parody...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed that the "TEXT BUBBLES" went by abit fast, slow them down somewhat for the viewer to read, and make the flash longer...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny starwars parody with joints, you should make more...

~X~