XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Poopswing]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny and gave me a few chuckles, it did seem abit un-finished, the poop flying was abit disturbing but still entertaining, you should finish it though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backrounds could use some animated props, such as some moving clouds, maybe a bird or two, a dog running around...

~~OVERALL~~
An unfinished poop flying something funny stuff...

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[Return of the joint]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha the ending was most funny, a perfect ending if i ever saw one, the flash seemed abut short but was entertaining, the characters were ok, and the animating was decent, nice starwars parody...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed that the "TEXT BUBBLES" went by abit fast, slow them down somewhat for the viewer to read, and make the flash longer...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny starwars parody with joints, you should make more...

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[Stick It]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining, the "BIG" Red button was funny, kinda over did it on that one, the sticks were ok but why not design some character characters, might improve on the flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for one lose the "BUTTONS" just play it like a real movie, the buttons tend to get anoying after awhile, and more backround detail would also be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
A short game flash with some repetitve buttons...

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[¥Sloveeier]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
OK now this was short, shorter then the avg, and not much was going on but a guy with no shirt and then Edn ha, it did make me laugh so i guess there is some fun to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well make it longer, add some story to it, oh and make it longer...

~~OVERALL~~
Short, Clocks, and short...

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[Levels:1]

((( HAHA THAT WAS COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha that was neat, i was expecting some game or something but it turnedout well, lots of good kills with lots of nice effects, cant wait for more, keep em coming...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well the backrounds could use some color, but for the most part it was well balnaced, maybe add other sticks in there with some guns or something, nice job though...

~~OVERALL~~

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OrigamiNugget responds:

Hahah! You will be satisfied with the sequel. I've been feverously working on it. I'm soo close to completion. I'm just finishin a boss fight, and then working on the blood. Heres a hint on the boss fight (Musrooms, flowers, and pipes) Hint hint!

[Mario gone mad]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually not that bad, i had fun with it, allthough it does have a few issues with at the end just "WHITE" screen, but as for the cartoon, it was funny, and i think "YOSHI" was the one who was mad hehe...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well add some propper play and replay buttons like at the end instead of a white screen...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny mario/yoshi parody with a mix of some ipod madness haha...

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[Worms : From newb 2 Pro]

((( HMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was interesting ill give you that, lots of drawings which was cool, some better some are so-so...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for one that filesize for sure, maybe split it up into two different parts?...

~~OVERALL~~
A very big file but some neat stuff to see...

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[The Race ++]

((( WOW IMPRESSED )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i was impressed with this, at first the animation was somewhat choppy, but then with all the different view shots like with the "LOCK" and "KEY" and when the character were running, it really turnedout well with some amazing scenes, props to you on a great animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The animation was abit choppy, maybe animating the characters "LIMBS" abit more would help, but for the most part it was good stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A very well animated flash with some awsome view shots, keep up all the good work...

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[NewbieScape 4 Members]

((( THIS WAS FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
I love your art work, allthough it could be abit better, this game/flash had funny voices, but i think it went well with the character, and such a funny character at that, nice work, hope to see more episodes soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while the art was ok, maybe not so "THICK" on the outline of stuff like rocks and pillars, and maybe even giving the character some propper legs...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash of newbs on gaming, this is sure to give you a good laugh, keep em coming...

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Lopaxe responds:

ty for review