XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SOMEONE LIKES BOBBY(?)]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
First of all the "LOOPING" gets anoying, may want to fix that, second it doesnt make much sense, all i heard was the one scream which was not that good to start off with, and the art was very sloppy, could use some refining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are lots of things to work on, better practice with making "CHARACTERS" aswell as some better use of colors and backounds, also give it some story with subtitles incase people cant understand the "AUDIO"...

You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
A flash with lots of work needed, from start to finish, but with practice it wouldnt be that bad, good luck...

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[Transformers: Prime Force]

((( COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all, and the transformers is a nice way to go, the flash was good and had its ups and downs here and there, but for the most part i liked it, i hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
File size for sure, 56k small
You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big. and work abit on more detail and backround effects...

~~OVERALL~~
Transformers what can i say...

~X~

[Silhouette: The Mannequin]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was interesting for sure, it lacked color even if you didnt want that, the "ANIMATION" was decent though, should have done more though, anyways decent short and interesting animating...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, even if it was just a few drops of "BLOOD" or just red spots, it will make the animation standout more, more "SOUND/FX" wouldnt hurt either...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting animation of Black and white style abit short but entertaining...

~X~

[Star Wars: Episode Canada]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok i couldnt stop laughing with this one, the "CHARACTERS" for one did make me laugh haha, i would say to improve on them but they are perfect, the flash was abit short but very funny, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make longer episodes, maybe more Starwars characters and more scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
A really funny "STARWARS" Parody, i must see, lots of laughs...

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[Worgle]

((( AWSOME GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Awsome graphics, reaally good effort with nice detail and great shadowing, the animation was decent, seemed abit slow though, the characters were decent, and the flash overall was decent, i was well entertained with the flash from start to finish, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great flash, maybe abit faster animating like when the girl is moving along, and more animatin on her limbs and head...

~~OVERALL~~
An outstanding flash with tond of detail, cant be missed a must see by all...

~X~

[run run run goat!]

((( CUTE AND ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This made me laugh, cute with the cow, which looked like a goat atfirst, the animation was funny, and the art like the goat was decent, nice animation, you should make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring in more character like a big guy chasing the goat, and more different scenes wouldnt hurt...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and cute flash very entertaining...

~X~

[Snoopy's Rant]

((( CONFUESED )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ok im not even sure what to say about it, it was odd and strange the "SNOOPY" poping around was funny, and thats about it, now if foamy was in it it might be a hit heh, no it was ok...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Instead of jpegs made into art, whynot create the backround yourself, might look better...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and interesting, but somewhat entertaining...

~X~

[Star Wars As It Should Be]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Its interesting, i like some of the funy quotes, but its ot much more then that, it made me laugh though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could make it the same size as your flash screen size, maybe even having some of your own aniamtions in the corner or even making an animationg of starwars...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting quoets with starwars clips, interesting but not original...

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[education sucks]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat kinda ran slow, but you did present it well with all the colors was cool, and was funny aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in the backrounds, more effects and speed up the animation...

~~OVERALL~~

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[Ires of the Dragon]

((( FUNNY ENDING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i liked this flash, it had a perfect ending, i do say the "CHARACTER" was very bland but had a uniquenes about him, and the whistle was funny, the dragon was cool and nice drawing of him, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well maybe make it abit longer, and more secenes with the dragon, i liked the blue sky but you could have some "CLOUDS" float by now and then...

~~OVERALL~~
A short but cute story of a dragon, made me laugh, nice flash, keep it up...

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