XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clerks Whassup?]

((( LOOPS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i do love the clerks movies, but this one seemed to loop, abit short, and the characters could movie more, the "WAZZUP" was neat, but gets old after awhile...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For one, more "ANIMATING" like the characters limbs and more use of different scenes and such, also the flash loops, which can be fixed with a simple "STOP-ACTION-CODE" and propper play and replay buttons...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny wazzup flash but could use more to it...

~X~

[A Halo Short - Episode 1]

((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, lots of detail, from everything to the characters to the backrounds, lots of effort in every little prop, trees ships and so-on i was impressed, you should make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing since this was just perfect nice job...

~~OVERALL~~
A ggreat flash with so much effort, nice work...

~X~

[Blobbles- ep. 3]

((( NICE ART )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a very shoert flash but very well done, i have not seen any of the others but i planto, the best part of this was the "ART" and use of "COLOR" really neat and good detail...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great flash, i would love to see it span longer episodes, aswell as take it into other scenes, and new and different characters wouldnt hurt...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and entertaining flash with welldone artwork...

~X~

JonBro responds:

Why are the words "ART" and "COLOR" capitalized and in quotes?

Also, episode 4 has one more character.

Thanks "FOR" the review.

[We Want Cake!]

((( UNIQUE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was was a strange flash but still "UNIQUE" more unique for its great use of color and odd "AUDIO" and lots of great characters and different ones not just one or two, lots of effort and skill in this one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well since this felt more like a music video you could work some borders into the whole thing so it feels like you are watching a screen, but for the most pat its really good...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash abit on the strange side but unique with great color...

~X~

Djehuty responds:

Yay, long live uniqueness!
Yeah, I kinda went for "strange" and "odd" and it turned out kinda good, didnt it? Of course, this is only my first submission and there are realy a lot of points to improve on, but Im workin on that =)
Thanks for the review!

[A Jaredite Adventure]

((( GOOD STORY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Good start of a story keeps you entertained and nice looking characters decent backrounds and scenes, this is neat for its story, and some decent animating aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit more detail in the "CHARACTERS" like different detail in the outfits,, for the most part you have dones well with this...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash with neat characters and a good story keep up the good work...

~X~

[The Quest]

((( VERY NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressed wit this flash, mainly the "ART WORK" in the characters, great use of coors and great depth from the backrounds, to the props to the characters an all around great flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much to improve on tis as its eally great as it is, the only thing i could think of is make more like this and longer it was great stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A great flash with tons of effort, a flash that should be seen by all, a great submission to newgrounds...

~X~

[H&S Insurance]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Cute flash with smooth looking art, and some good voice-overs, the "CHARACTER" was decent and nice backrounds, nice smooth colors aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest bringing more characters into the flash as well as taking it into moe scenes and different ones with much more props and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and cute flash very fresh feel, could use more to it though...

~X~

[LL-The Staff's Night Off]

((( DECENT )))

[[REVIEW]]
Decent Lock flash, allthough im not into the locks or clocks or any other groups it still was an entertaining flash and i had fun watching it...

[[THINGS TO IMPROVE]]
I would love to see some changes in the locks characters as making moe detail, more depth of the story, and lowering the file size would really be an improvement...

[[OVERALL]]
Funny and entertaining but abit big in filesize, nice flash though...

~X~

Galloglasses responds:

Wow I just got reveiwed by the guy who made ghost motel, Thx for the advice man, I'll try and fix my flash up next time.