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[Subterranean Losers]

I love this idea

I really like the idea here it was a tad bit short though you should really make more into this more depth into the story because you do have a good idea here and the animation is notbad at all on this so nice work here my advice is make it longer and ad more depth into it as well besides that it's a nice piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth into the story more longer

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["The Dinosaur Bone"]

Nice

This was cool I really like the music it was very fitting and the animation itself was pretty brilliant and the story was notbad but you could ad more depth to the story giving more suprised in the story and even some flashy effects to spice things up would be a huge plus on things anyways nice job on this fine film make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth to the story more fancy effcts

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LUCA-FATTORE responds:

Couldn't agree more! : )

["BZz"]

Nice

This was a nice entry the story was simple but you made it fun you made it entertaining the audio was really good and matched up well and made it a very good animation as for improving I think you can make this a little longer but not by much anyways good stuff here I was very entertained with the story here anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it a tad longer

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LUCA-FATTORE responds:

Your input is awesome, the short would definitely improve with a longer ending!

[2SORT - Axiom of Escobar]

Notbad at all

So this was cool I like what you did here the animation was very nice and flowed very well the story was ok but still the animation was very nice I like what you did and you can see the flash just go with great talent and it shows very well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure as this one was pretty solid

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[ART.FLA]

Decent

Well the animation was pretty decent but for the story itself it was kind of confusing and didn't catch on till I watched it a few times but the animation was really good and a nice visual aswell so nice job anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More understanding of the story

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Rgessimai responds:

I will make 3 minutes sequel when I will get new PC

[Anxiety]

Very good style

Very good style of animation here I like the idea and the concept of this you really did play it well of what it is like or can be like I love the flow of animation and the story was pretty top notch I think the only thing that could happen her for a small change would be more flashy effects throughout the whole thing anyways nice job on this film here I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added flashy effects would be nice

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[Spring]

Nice visuals

Wow I must say this was something really to just enjoy for the very nice visuals the story was not enough for me because it was a rather short entry but the visuals we're pretty amazing I do like this though and my suggestion of advice would be to make it longer and more to the story anyways keep up the great flash works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer and more story

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[Wumboman Vs. Purp3L]

Very nice

And here was some nice stick fights of course these were a little better then most but I enjoyed it you have some good animation on this it was the story that was needed more to it more depth to the story would be a huge plus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more depth into the story

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[PUNCH MAIL!!]

Notbad

This was a decent little animation you have here and the ideas was kind of funny and the animation seemed choppy or the timing was off but you can smooth out the animation just a little very nice job indeed but good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some polish on the animation would be nice

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[Nier Automata-2B Last Moment]

This was amusing

Well that was kind of funny I like the entertaining value you that you do bring to this the cameo appearnce of that one charchter was a nice idea very good ideas on this one it was pretty good stuff though and I was pleased with all that you did here I would love to see more of the adult themes in this one though so very nice work and keep making these kinds of flash works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More adult themes would improve on the idea

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