XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Melon Ted]

((( LOVE THE SMOOTH ART )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had a great character very smooth looking graphics like the chatacter and even the backrounds, it was extremly short thoug, actually way too short to obsorb it all, great short though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer or improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
A very short animation but shows lots of effort and love that character, it was sorta funny, nice job...

~X~

[just2pale Halloween]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda like a halloween card sorta, the characters were very impressive, showing lots of effort in detail from the hair to the animation in eyes, also great voicesing very realistic to the characters...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit short, add more scenes and more story to it, it will improve on the flash overall

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and funny flash somewhat short but still very good work...

~X~

[Daily2oon09162005]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually notbad, made me laugh on some of the clips, they were actually of good quality i was impressed, llthough the main menu was abit misleading, nice animations everyone...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A better menue with atleast some color, other then that it was reall good...

~~OVERALL~~
A parody i think but with more quality to it...

~X~

[Infestation: Part 1]

((( CONFUSING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this was abit confusing, not sure what was going on but it did have some nice artwork and good use of color, just abit confusing and verys hort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, give it some sort of story, and some sorta character base...

~~OVERALL~~
A very very short animation confusing but an animation at that, check itout sometime, if you dare...

~X~

[Joey's Story ep. 2]

((( COULD E IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
This could be improved. the animation wa sok actually kinda smooth, the volume seemed abit low though, and the backrounds were abit bland as were the characters aswell, its ok but can be better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like with the characters, eyes and mouths, and some backrounds would help more details showing more then just the lines...

~~OVERALL~~
A good animation but can be better with some detailing...

~X~

[Butlers]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Really nice job on the characters, mainly the hair, showed some good detail and effort, the characters looked funny with there skinny arms and all, the flash was really funny there voices did seem abit low but still funny stuff, nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i would suggest some "SUBTITLES" just incase the volume is lower for other users, will also help to understand whats being said better, also you could take the flash into other scenes maybe have them walk around the city or something...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash with some entertaining and strange characters, really nice animation...

~X~

[Blood Ravens Story]

((( DECENT FLASH )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a decent flash i was actually very into it, lots to see and has a certian style to it that i liked, very good work on the story very well done, i did wait abit of time before it loaded though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Download time 4megs was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us us 56k.

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash with some good thought and effort behind it, but needs compressing badly...

~X~

[blockheads]

((( VERY GOOD SKETCHING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, i love the sketch drawings, the animating of them was actually notbad either, i love teh sketsches though it was abit different and had a unique style to it, it also playedout a sorta story, very nice job i would love to see this in a series...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more for sure, and maybe better animating i mean with more limbs animated, also some voices from the characters to give a sense of more of a story...

~~OVERALL~~
A great and unique flash, different and while it has no color it has a sense of style to it...

~X~

[Boredom is Bad]

((( NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta funny, the "ARTWORK" was the best though from head to toe it had great shading and detail, and awsome animation, flowed very easy and smooth, i thought the "AUDIO" from dumb and dumber shouldnt have been used it just didnt look right...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe faster loading so you could cut here and there to give it a better loading time or something...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash, a familuar audio but over-used it, nice and funny flash though, you should make more soon...

~X~

LaserKarl responds:

Thanks man!
Many nice tips here :)