XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My First Stick Movie]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
A decent stick battle, even the black and white is cool, allthough some color would be nice, the sticks are abit big but still ok, also the 3d like turning of the sticks was neat...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could give it a story other then just the fighting it will give the flash more depth, and some "COLOR" wouldnt hurt either, the sound/fx was cool but some "VOICE-OVERS" would improve on it...

~~OVERALL~~
A stick fight with some nice effects could be better though...

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[WISE SOUL]

((( SIMPLE BUT FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
A simple yet funny flash, the "STICK" characters are funny, the "ART" well there was not much color, As for the story it played out ok, and the animation was notbad at all...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could start by changing the sticks into better defined characters with more emotion and animation, add more color to the backtound, and keep music flowing throughout the entire flash...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash simple idea but very entertaining, could use a few detail on art and characters...

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[DJ Frog]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute and entertaining, kinda like a "MUSIC-VIDEO" the frog was cool as was the rest of the art very smooth, and some neat animation nice and smooth...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could make it longer, maybe bring different "CHARACTERS" into the flash more props in the backround, also take the flash into different scenes for more depth...

~~OVERALL~~
A funn but short flash with smooth art and animation...

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[Happy Fun Time Show!]

((( FUNNY STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was very funny, maybe abit short, but very funny, alsom reminds me of "VEGGIE TALES" except without all the killing hehe, anyways the slice and dice was cool, keep up the funny flashing...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as this was really funny, i enjoyed it but it did start playing right away, so you may want to add some propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons, and maybe make it abit longer...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and funny flash abit on the short side but entertaining, a must see by all...

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[Happy Thoughts]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok abit of "SNL" haha ya it was a great idea, but lacked alot explained things to improve, anyways good idea, simple backrounds, lacked sound, and buttons...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well the idea was great, but could be improved with stuff such as, Propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons, some "MUSIC" and or "SOUND/FX" a voice-er of what the text is saying would really impove on this...

~~OVERALL~~
A great idea but was not used to its full effect, funny though...

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[Eat It! Full]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well the flash was entertaining, i would say this flash was because of the "MUSIC" and the animation flowed well with the music, very well done there, the "POPPING OUT" of the different characters from side to side was also a nice touch...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Only real thing i could see would be to add some "SUBTITLES" for the music or if they talk and such, and maybe more different scenes and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny lock flash, great music, and very entertaining...

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[Doctor Nerd Explains ep.1]

((( COULD LOOK BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this needs some work, but im sure you know that, but anyways, decent idea, characters well it was sticks cant help you much there, better luck next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well this needs lots of work, such as a better design or look to it something with a fesh look, borders, buttons and so-0n, also some "MUSIC" could really help out even in the score, anyways work on it abit...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange flash decent idea, also lacked effort could be improved, good luck...

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[Announcement (parody)]

((( HMMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well i seen these a ton of times, but this one seemed poorly made, the "IDEA" is funny but gets old after awhile, you should use more effort and more funny is needed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it needs lots of work, fist of all could be longer, and maybe with better "CHARACTERS" aswell as better looking "COMPUTER" give it some style to standout from the rest...

~~OVERALL~~
Well another parody nothing much new here, nice try though...

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[LL - MSN PERVERTS]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Not a bad flash here the Ending got a little anoying with the "NOISE" and all, the flash did seem abit short aswell, i did like the nice and smooth look to the Locks

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could make it longer, with a moe of a story or something, it was just way too short, and maybe bring more lock characters and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny yet short flash of locks but still entertaining, nice job, keep it up...

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[A Short Litle Story]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well a decent but cute little flash, with some really nice work on the characters, lots of great detail, not a bad flash at all, i was pleased, with the outcome...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm not much to improve on as it was already good, maybe some darker backrounds as there were abit hard to see and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A cute short but entertaining flash with great characters...

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