XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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((( HMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny ad, it made me laugh, i would have liked to see it continue on into more scenes, you also had some nice characters and such, maybe make more to it or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well add more characters could be a start, and maybe more different scenes other then just at the desk...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny ad of aol, nice work, hope to see more soon...

~X~

[Ultimate Paintball]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, the "GUNS" did seem abit large for the "CHARACTERS" it was ok, i liked the story portion more then anything as it had some style to it, nice work, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the weapons abit smaller to be realistic to the character's bodies and all, also more detail in the backrounds aswell as more deined characters...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny paintballl story with some ok animating and use of color...

~X~

[Bib and George: Air]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny and very entertaining, some of the "ART" was neat and cool, could use more effort though, i still enjoyed the flash, hope to see more soon, nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe abit longer, i likeed the filesize so there was still room for more into it, more effects and more interactive options, nice work though...

~~OVERALL~~
Decent and interesting, keeps the viewer entertained, could use more to it though...

~X~

[Kerpal]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this has been seen a few times, and as others say there wasent much to it, i do understand its abit old but still...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could have added lots of elements that make a flash good, original ideas, more animating, more voicing and so on...

~~OVERALL~~
It had very little effort i would suggest more time on it, good luck...

~X~

[dont see it (same movie)]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Its decent, and for an older movie still up there with the best of them, the "ART" was really nice to see, some really decent drawings, you should make more when you have time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe adding more animation, and more to it, while it was really cool with the drawings could be improved with more effects and animating...

~~OVERALL~~
Overall a decent flash shows decent effort, hope to see more soon...

~X~

[Cereal]

((( HUH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was shorter then anything i seen before, but the "ART" and "ANIMATION" was very well done well what i saw of it anyways...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, cause the graphics was great and smooth animation, but you need more to it more story and more funny...

~~OVERALL~~
A very very short flash but with great skill, hope to see more soon...

~X~

[Chicken Suit for the Soul]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Cute but short, still entertaining, the main "CHARACTER" was funny and neat to see what he does, funny short flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well not really much since it was really good, maybe make it abit longer next time, nice work though...

~~OVERALL~~
A short but entertaining flash, very funny and nice characters...

~X~

Sk8erGirl14 responds:

hey thanks...^__^ I had fun making it...sorry that it was short...but I did it real fast for a class I had at the time...glad you enjoyed it...

thanks for the review...

[My First Stick Movie]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
A decent stick battle, even the black and white is cool, allthough some color would be nice, the sticks are abit big but still ok, also the 3d like turning of the sticks was neat...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could give it a story other then just the fighting it will give the flash more depth, and some "COLOR" wouldnt hurt either, the sound/fx was cool but some "VOICE-OVERS" would improve on it...

~~OVERALL~~
A stick fight with some nice effects could be better though...

~X~