XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[All About Love]

((( NICE FLOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
This had a nice flow of animation, the "CHARACTERS" were decent could use more work though, but for the most part it was a good flash, really nice flow, nice job hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth in color like shading, like when you do a close up of the guy the colors are abit bland, might be something to work on...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash, nice flow of animating, some decent animation here, keep it up...

~X~

[Angel Asylum Teaser]

((( MUSIC VIDEO )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was like a music video, sorta, it wasnt too short or too long, and with some really nice and the "SLOW" scrolling was decent, there was not much to it, and didnt give enough detail on what to expect on a full version, but still a good flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and info on what to expect on a full version, its a good start though...

~~OVERALL~~
A short video or preview of a full version, nice start...

~X~

[All Your Face]

((( IT WAS FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
It made me laugh somewhat, the different clip show of "JPEGS" was interesting, and the audio allthough abit static was funny but could be better, i was entertained though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, and you could add some more animations with more characters and such...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash with a funny "FACE"

~X~

[Alien Invasion Collab]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was very good, i was very impressed with the "ANIMATION" and "EFFECTS" of all the different flashworks, and they all presented something special, the animation really ran well very good work, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much as this was a very unique flash i loved every bit of it...

~~OVERALL~~
A colab flash of aliens well made with lots of efforts an A+

~X~

[aLiveJournal: 2005/09/23]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, i have seen a few of these and they are always great and the characters are cute and original, good animating, and always comes with a funny, nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im not sure maybe its just me but the "LOGO" just loaded at first, not sure if that was a glicj, the characters were cool though...

~~OVERALL~~
Another great episode, always with the funny, keep up the good work...

~X~

[bupo is a block!]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
I must say this was funy, and made me laugh abit, but the "ART" itself was pretty decent, and the flow of animation was decent...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well since it was hard to hear, "SUBTITLES" wouldnt hurt, or louder volume, but subtitles would improve on the flash...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun curte flash with some decent art and graphics, nice job hope to see more soon...

~X~

[SOMEONE LIKES BOBBY(?)]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
First of all the "LOOPING" gets anoying, may want to fix that, second it doesnt make much sense, all i heard was the one scream which was not that good to start off with, and the art was very sloppy, could use some refining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are lots of things to work on, better practice with making "CHARACTERS" aswell as some better use of colors and backounds, also give it some story with subtitles incase people cant understand the "AUDIO"...

You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
A flash with lots of work needed, from start to finish, but with practice it wouldnt be that bad, good luck...

~X~

[Transformers: Prime Force]

((( COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all, and the transformers is a nice way to go, the flash was good and had its ups and downs here and there, but for the most part i liked it, i hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
File size for sure, 56k small
You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big. and work abit on more detail and backround effects...

~~OVERALL~~
Transformers what can i say...

~X~

[Silhouette: The Mannequin]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was interesting for sure, it lacked color even if you didnt want that, the "ANIMATION" was decent though, should have done more though, anyways decent short and interesting animating...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, even if it was just a few drops of "BLOOD" or just red spots, it will make the animation standout more, more "SOUND/FX" wouldnt hurt either...

~~OVERALL~~
An interesting animation of Black and white style abit short but entertaining...

~X~