XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Freds Crazy Adventure]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This is decent, i like how the story playsout, it has a cetain humor value aswell, the charater is notbad could have more depth though as for the flash its notbad, i hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k.

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash nice story and funny, could be a series...

~X~

[Goomba Epoch ep.1 MX]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this one made me laugh, i was very amused and entertained, you had the characters right on, and nice artwork and graphics really worked well, nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more different characters wold be cool...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny goomba like parody, nice work...

~X~

[plum clock shorts]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, it was interesting, kinda neat with the music and all it really flowed well, and i like some of the sorta story very nice it was entertaining, you should make more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more characters for that extra overall...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun clock flash of shorts some have story some are just funny...

~X~

[Freestylin (short ver)]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok it was funny the diffrent effects and changes made me laugh, also the music really flowed well with the entertaining character hehe, anyways nice work keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more backround effects and colors for the overall outcome of it all...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny flash with lots of funny effects...

~X~

[Kingdumb hearts 2 trailer]

((( VERY NICE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressed with this, it has stile, and some good grapghics, the file was not that large and not too small but could be compressed just abit, anyways nice work, keep it coming...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything i can really see would abit of compressing...

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash lots of stuff going on and good graphics, nice work...

~X~

[King of the Darn'ded 5]

((( VERY NICE FLASH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Now this i liked it had it all form detail, and effects to flowing animation, a very nice animation lots of detail is what i like and this was very impressive nice work, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the 3+ meg file as it was abit much on downloading...

~~OVERALL~~
A big file but well worth the wait, nice detail aswell...

~X~

[Teh BEES collab]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, i like all of them, but they tend to be unfishied or just glichy, they do have a certain humor value to them but are funny, maybe abit better presentation like on the menu...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better presentation of the menu, with more color and depth...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny number of flash clips, will make you laugh abit, needs more effort though...

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[Create]

((( COULD USE MORE DETAIL )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but needs more effort, for one the file seemed abit large, but also could use more detail, i did like it, just givin it some time would make it much more enjoyble, nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like with the character and maybe some more effects for the backrounds, use different colors to blend something neat...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash but could still use some more effort and detail...

~X~