XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Swingline]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was interesting and some of the stuff was ok, but could be much better, shows abit of effort, and the file was needing some compressing...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file, add more characters, and more color, and some smoother animating...

~~OVERALL~~
A flash which was interesting but needs work...

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[Drawing Contest #2]

((( NICE IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey this was a good idea of a drawing contest, not sure if i seen the first but i will after this, but anyways it was funny seeing everything come together, and i liked the end results most of all, great idea, keep it going...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth in color would be nice, i do understand the drawing is a big part of it though...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny idea and welldone, a must see by all, anyways nice flash, and great idea...

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[Drawing Contest #1]

((( VERY NICE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well since i saw the second one figured i should check this out, and i must say the second one has the best improvment and has good style about it all, this one was good aswell very impressed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just make more these they are great and very entertaining...

~~OVERALL~~
Part 1 of a fun and very entertaining series, nice job...

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[Gernade]

((( CUTE AND FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute and funny, made me laugh, seemed abit short though, and while the animation was decent the backrounds could use some work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some clouds or some trees to the backround, and it could be abit longer, maybe even have the guy talk abit or scream...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny short flash, good animation aswell, nice short...

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[franken-stank]

((( NICE SONG )))

~~REVIEW~~
The song was pleasent and seemed to flow with the animation, i noticed the flash "LOOPED" may want to fix that explained below, anyways nice character shows good detail and decent use of color, the song really worked well, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash, it will make it run better...

~~OVERALL~~
A good little flash, could use some fixing, but a funny and entertaining flash, with some good flowing music...

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[Megaman vs Two_Time_Stu]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, kinda neat, the sprites looked ok, they could be abit sharper looking though, i did notice the backrounds could be improved aswell, other then that it was somewhat entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in the backrounds clouds and wind and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny little battle, could use more work though...

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[Megaman VS bass Finale]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was decent but could use more work, the sprites are ok but could have abit more to them aswell, the flash was ok for just your second sprite works though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The file seemed abit large, might want to compress it somewhat, im not the greatest fan of sprites, but this was an ok flash, i wouldnt mind seeing some real art in there though, sprites are cool but they do seem like the easy style of just plopping down and so-on, a mixture of sprites and flash art would make in different and not just the sprite way.

~~OVERALL~~
A decent little sprite flash could use more ideas and some compressing...

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[Gone - Part 1]

((( VERY GOOD ART )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow very nice artwork, even if it seemed as if it was more "STILL" then "ANIMATED" the art was great though, along with awsome music that flowed with the story, very nice work indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some voices for the "CHARACTER" would be great and greatly improve on the flash, could also be abit longer in the story...

~~OVERALL~~
A great flash with great art graphics, animating could be better, but for the most part it was a good flash with story...

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[God Killer Preview]

((( DECENT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad for a preview, but could contain abit more too it just more detail in the full version, but i must say it still had a good amount of stuff going on and i was generally pleased...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit more towrads the ending, and maybe some compressing on the filesize...

~~OVERALL~~
A good preview with some ok action, cant wait till a full version

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