XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-FourSteps-]

((( LOTS OF COLOR )))

~~REVIEW~~
This has promise, it ended too short, started out great with all the color and the ok music, just ended so fast, wish it had more going on, nice job though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer,a nd you may want to have some better quality on the sound it was abit scratchy...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but good start, love the use of color kinda artistic...

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M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the review;
I only made it 30 seconds long because the original advert was 30 seconds long.

[The Mourner]

((( VERY SLOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda not that good, i man the "CHARACTERS" were great and lots of detail, but very little animation, it also looped which was not good, might want to work out the bugs on this one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash

~~OVERALL~~
Loops and was very slow needs some work...

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[-cliff-]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Not sure what to say about this but it did give me a chuckle or two hehe, it was really random and the "TOM FULP" head was very funny, seemed abit short though but was still ok i thought...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm its very random so i would leave it as is or make it even more random...

~~OVERALL~~
Short and random, with an apearance by ton fulp...

~X~

[Funny Cola]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this started out ok and the end well that was not expected but it made me laugh, the "JPEG" images were abit cheesy though anyways nice trick...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it was meant to be this way so dont know wht there is to improve on...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and unexpected is the right words...

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GreyClock responds:

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[HEAT MAN 1]

((( ABIT OLD BUT ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well its been awhile since i seen any flash with heatman but its nice to find this, abit chessy with the "JPEG" explosions, and as for the music it seemed fitting, it was entertaining, thats all i can say...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm not sure, not even sure if you come here anymore...

~~OVERALL~~
Heatman what more can be said...

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[ATHF Theme Backwards]

((( FUNNY MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, made me laugh lots of good moments, suprised i didnt see this before, but its funny, the size was abit much, but still good stuff, you ever gonna make any more of these???

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Shorten the size if you can or try and cut it into two differrent parts...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun and entertaining will make you laugh...

~X~

[Spider - Man Movie]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i like anything spiderman and i must say you did a good job on this one, the "ANIMATION" was probably the best part though, and very welldone on the character himself, awsome work, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could make it longer, maybe even in some sorta story...

~~OVERALL~~
Spider man flying through the city very nice flowing animation...

~X~

[Diagonal :: Kegman]

((( CUTE BUT SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute but sorta short, kinda ended after about 3 seconds, and was just to fast to get into anything, it was funny though and could have used some color, even just abit of color would have been nice...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color even some blood at the end kill woul help, and make it longer if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny fast at the blink of an eye...

~X~

[7 Feet under (Noir)]

((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was awsome from start to finish, the animation to the intense graphics of backrounds and characters very nice indeed, you should make a full version movies though, it was great stuff though, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was perfect, make a full version though...

~~OVERALL~~
A great flash lots of skill and talent, nice job, hope to see more soon...

~X~

[Jazzballians tutorial 1]

((( DECENT BUT NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was coo, but you should have added more then just one thing in it like a few more would have been better, it was abit simple but maybe it gives the users an idea of how things work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There was only one tutorial on this, i would suggest to improve on the flash tutorial you could add multiple tutorials and put them all on one flash instead of just the one or even two, but having alot in one flash would make it more helpful as its all there for the user to learn from.

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting tutorial but needs more, nice try though...

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