XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TD-Shut The World Out]

Nice style

And so this was a nice style I like some of the jokes and the drawings are not half bad you do have some good flow of animation here I think you could make the story turn into a few twists with more depth but it was still a good story here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good story maybe as more depth with a few twists and turns

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Raziberry responds:

A few twists and turns? Dude, this is my real life, sorry my life is boring!

[Snacks On A Plane]

Lol

Ok so there are some jokes in this one and was pretty funny could use more random jokes but the animation was notbad and the story was pretty good too a good flash animation hee just ad a few more jokes for next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more random jokes would be good

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[Pixel Day at the Park]

Nice animation

And this was a good animation you have here I love the idea of pixel and such but that poor dog lol so you did put some energy into this and it seemed to work I think if you added some more flashy effects it would be even better but I will give you a big congrats for the well deserved awards anyways keep up the brilliant animations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flashy effects in the action scenes

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[Foofie]

Oh that foodie

So this was pretty good and nice little charchter and the element of this whole piece was pretty good I did think that you could have made more to this but you have some nice animation here and was overall pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was great as is

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[Dream Labyrinth]

This was nifty

Well I have to say this was kind of nifty I like the idea of this but seems like this film was lacking in depth of the story and that's something you could really push forward the visuals are pretty good though and make it longer

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and give the story more depth

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[Game Grumps Animated - WHO FARTED?]

Nice

I have not seen alot of the game grumps stuff but have to say this one caught my eye with some nice style I like the idea of this one too very nice animation the random ideas in this was cool too you really did push the effort and made something great so for that alone props to you on all the hard work hope to see more from you in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not too sure more of the random ideas turned into more

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TheWitchBoi responds:

Thanks for the review! This cartoon was actually made back in 2013, so a LOT has improved since then. Hope you consider following me and more of my work!

[Super Action Cops]

Entertaining

Well this one was pretty entertaining and you do bring out the comedy with all the elements and the characters are notbad and a good flow of animation is good here always nice work I would love to see more random comedy and humor though you did an outstanding job so keep that up anyways untill next time nice flick

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More random comedy and humor

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Derp-dee-derp responds:

Glad you liked it, new toon up now, check it out! Jailbird 2 - Deadly

[One Punch Stick Episode 1 to 4]

Notbad

Can't say I have seen others or most of it but with this one you really braught out the scenes and made this kind of fun to watch the flow of animation was notbad and the entertaining level was pretty high I think more action scenes could be pushed a little but anyways nice work indeed on this piece of good film making anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More action scenes and more randomness

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[Miss.Dynamite XIII]

Very good

And once again another nice episdes with some flashy art and even better animation but then again this series always produces some very good elements the story was really good on this one what can be better make it much longer and more adveture

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More action scenes more adventurous activities

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[Miss.Dynamite XVI]

Lol

This was pretty good the animation was good the story was pretty impressive and the style was notbad either I like it all the art was good as always you have a nice style of work here and glad I had the chance to review these as they are great stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As before I think some extra flashy effects would have been great

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