XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yoshi's Island 3 Contest]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well better then notbad, it had some very sharp sprites and very smooth animation, i kinda thought the score should have been abit better though, it was entertaining though, im impressed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize that was just too much for me...

~~OVERALL~~
LARGE file but good flash and nice looking sprites...

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[Tom & Katie]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Yeah hollywood is strange and the things they do, heh this flash was funny, glad i saw it, the characters were just right and made it very interesting nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More humor on tom and katie would be good...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining...

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[Yet Another Day]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow the "GRAPHICS" alone were very intense, from start to finish, i would say lower the file but i understand why, some nice art and some better animating very well done, props to you my friend...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Still think about lowering the file somehow...

~~OVERALL~~
Large file but great outcome from start to finish...

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[Grey Man Skateboard2]

((( IT WAS INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was interesting, i thought it would have been something deeper with the music that was playing, it also seemed as if it was un-finished towards the end?? it was an ok flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer, maybe have him skate around the city and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A stick skate flash, some really nice music to go with...

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TheteamN responds:

Thanks for your review.You are a good flash animator!

[-Singin' In The Rain-]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
I like the smooth animating, and the differrent color chnges, i still think there should have been something more like some props in the backround or even some trees maybe even some "RAIN" effects...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some rain effects would be good to match the title...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat animating, cool colors nice job, hope to see more...

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[This Beautyful Offspring]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was very slow but notbad at all, the sketchy like drawings were cool, and the shadings here and therew as even better, as for the story it was strange but interesting, nice little flash here...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the animation abit faster or smoother...

~~OVERALL~~
Slow and strange but the end was funny, nice job...

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KRLA responds:

Yes, I agree. This was my second flash ever. The first one got blammed imidietly. I´ll keep your tips in mind when messing around. I´m just learning at the moment. Thanks

[Clerks Cartoon 1]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
I have the first few episodes of the real cartoon on dvd, its very funny, nice presentaion of the characters, and good idea of the english version of the store hehe, the audio is what drove this and made it funny, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer or make more episodes for it...

~~OVERALL~~
Clerks coming to a store near you hehe...

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[MOO?]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok now that was funny, you should have had the cow go "MOOOOOOO" at the end and then run off hehe, anyways funny toon, and some really good "VOICE-OVERS" not much animation but it was fine as the joke was funny as hell nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit longer and more of the joke to give it that humor...

~~OVERALL~~
A cow or is it a bull? hehe funny toon here everyone needs to watch this one, good stuff...

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[E-Ticit]

((( LOVE THE COLORS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat for the reds and black colors kinda making it artistic in a way, it did loop and that got anoying after awhile, also nice music in the backrounds, but you should fix the looping of the flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the looping, you need to add a stop action code so it wont loop, aswell as some play and replay buttons...

~~OVERALL~~
Artistis in the way of the color...

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[Stone Trek: Episode 1]

((( AWW THE FIRST )))

~~REVIEW~~
So this is the first episode cool cool, i still say the first is the best one, but it does have some humor, the "SOUND" seems to drop out about half way, you may want to look into that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them longer, and more close ups of the heads...

~~OVERALL~~
Episode one of a great series awsome toons here...

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