XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stone Trek: Episode 1]

((( AWW THE FIRST )))

~~REVIEW~~
So this is the first episode cool cool, i still say the first is the best one, but it does have some humor, the "SOUND" seems to drop out about half way, you may want to look into that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them longer, and more close ups of the heads...

~~OVERALL~~
Episode one of a great series awsome toons here...

~X~

[FRANQ]

((( UM OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, seems like it is unfinished somehow, also i didnt notice any play or replay buttons, thats something you may want to work on, as for the moving head it was cute, but not much more then that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation, some play and replay buttons aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Simple cute but needs work...

~X~

[HEAT MAN Dr. Zaius!]

((( ENTERTAINING VIDEO )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol well it was like a video and was entertaining, i noticed the "PHIL HEARTMAN" lines from "SNL" that was funny, the sprites did look abit blocky, and the mouths were ok but could be better, funny video i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better looking mouths, and sharper looking sprites would be some improving...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and like a music video, needs some fix's here and there, keep up the good work...

~X~

[Buy Me A Pony]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha it was entertaining, abit random at times but funny, the jpegs were ok, the white backrounds could have had some detail or even some jpegs themself, funny song to go with the random images...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stuff in the base backround besides the white backdrop...

~~OVERALL~~
Random and lots of jpegs, lots of wacky stuff here...

~X~

[birdies]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, nice color, the screen did seem abit small, and the flash itself seemed to freeze up now and then, it was cute though, nice try at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger screen, even some borders around the screen would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and good use of color...

~X~

[beast]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok kinda stopped in the middle, froze i mean, anyways the backround jpegs were ok, and as for the guy running kinda neat, i like the mixture of toon and jpeg kinda neat, other then that it was just ok...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure it was sorta strange...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange but sorta neat...

~X~

dus10 responds:

well it was for a school priject with a one week time limit, so the fact that u even came close to enjoying it puts a smile on my face, thanks!

[Attempt]

((( NEEDS LOTS OF WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok but could have been much better, you had an ok idea but it needs more effort and you need to learn to compress or cut it down in parts, that would be the first step to a better flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the 4 + meg file that was abit much...

~~OVERALL~~
Very big file which was not needed and seems like not much effort went into this on your part...

~X~

[Attack On The Glocks 2]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i had some interest in it, it could use some more detail especialy in the backrounds, aswell as some flashy effects, but i was entertained with it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file, and add some backround effects that pazazz the viewers...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining, needs more effects though...

~X~

[Army Thing]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well notbad, i kinda liked it, it had some areas that were kinda bland, but it was cool to see, and notbad work for your first, i hope you decide to make more and present us with improved artworks, nice job here, its decent...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and lower the size of the file, its not bad but is getting up there abit...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but fun and neat, needs some detail here and there...

~X~

[Archangel- Total War]

((( GOOD ACTION )))

~~REVIEW~~
Aww sticks but something different cool, the "BOW/ARROWS" was a nice touch and probably what made it different then the blatent sticks and guns, and very good music choice to flow with the animation, nice job, i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing here it was just right...

~~OVERALL~~
Very clever and good idea with the bows sticks but with a twist, great film...

~X~