XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[a bit life ep.1]

((( WHOAAA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow the filesize just about took forever, you should work that out somehow, it was interesting kept me interested, could use some more graphics and detail to it but i was entertained...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the flash size for starters that was just massive, and more detail aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
A big file so hope you all dont have 56k lol...

~X~

blackdeathX1 responds:

thanks, of corse that was awhile ago so i am better now. I'm 14 so i still have bad spelling but next time i well get someone to help me. ^_^

[Flightless Birds FTW]

((( I LIKED IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was meat, i like the "ART" and colors also the 2 clips was good but the second one was way too short seemed like you didnt even try with that one, funny stuff though, you should make more like this sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer clips, even more clips then just the two, and more effort within each one...

~~OVERALL~~
A couple of short clips but sorta entertaining...

~X~

Crusty-Wiwuh responds:

There are 3 clips now, I added one. And yeah the elephant thing I actually did for a friend as a joke- I thought I may as well put it in with something else and submit it.

Thanks for the review dood :)

[(1) Pacman vs. Mario]

((( LOL CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ook that was cute like the otherone, the "SOUND" quality is still bad though too much static, and still short, might want to improve on that, it was entertaining though so ill give you that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better sound quality, and longer flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but entertaining...

~X~

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Yeah, it wasn't that long...

[(2) Pacman vs. Luigi]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Not sure what to say with this one, for one the sound is way loud or too static or something, it was also very short, but kinda amusing, i had fun watching it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better sound quality, make it longer, maybe even some sorta story...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but funny, needs some work...

~X~

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

ok

[ninja vs hedgehog]

((( COMPRESS THE FILE )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was actually good, abit funny on some parts, and had some decent action, but that file was massive, might want to work on it abit, anyways good flash, i had fun watching it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize, its about the onlything holding it down for other users to enjoy it...

~~OVERALL~~
A sprite action flash abit long to download though...

~X~

[How to hold a knife]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting seemed to go by way to fast to be able to grasp everything, the effects and music seemed to really flow with eachother though, just make it longer and slower...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs to be slower and more scenes, just abit longer even...

~~OVERALL~~
Some great effects, might be over in 4 seconds though...

~X~

[not stick SKATER movie 4]

((( COOL ALMOST 3d LIKE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat almost has that 3d feel to it, maybe its me but i didnt hear any "SOUND" ???? anyways this could be used like in a story just more effort with some character dialog and stuff, great visuals though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it into a story or movie with the same visuals just add more characters and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A 3d- like skate flash, needs some audio though...

~X~

[Megaman Vs Megaman V2]

((( IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was impressive, i normaly dont get to check these out but this one was wellmade, nice flow of animation and some nice moments throughout the flash, even the filesize was not that bad, nice work indeed, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining but most of all well put together....

~X~

[LL- Seizure Collab III]

((( NOTBAD BUT ....... )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaining, you just may want to slow down abit on the massive flasshing, but the rest was great, and then there was the size, explained below, funny flash though, hope to see more from you soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Might want to bring the filesize down somewhat, The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun and entertaining just way too much flashing effects...

~X~