XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Joker Luvin]

((( SHORT BUT CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok i liked this it made me laugh, really shrt though, the color was just perfect just like in batman cartoons, funny toon though, you should really think about making more though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer maybe some "VOICE-OVERS" something to give it abit more quality...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny short of the joker and his love for batman...

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[Rodriguez the goat]

((( CUTE AND ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute and enetertaining, kinda short, kinda neat matching the audio with the animation, it made me laugh could be longer though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more episodes, maybe some more characters, it was funny stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short, you should make more sometime...

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[SmS Ep.1]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Heh ok this is another funny short, i was not expecting the outcome, poor yoshi hehe, someone is always trying to get princess not in this case though hehe, anyways nice work, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit short, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A short with some mystery in the darkness, oh and some bad habbits of luigi hehe...

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["Cosm"]

((( INTERESTING BUT LOOPS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting flowed very slow and easy very pleasent, it looped over and over, you may want to fix that, explained beloew, it was nice flash kinda slow but thats what was neat about it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Slow and easy, but could be fixed with the looping, also some "SOUND/FX" would be nice...

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[B-Jesus!!]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny and entertaining, made me laugh, it did seem short, but was ok, maybe make a story with some "VOICE-OVERS" it would give it a certain style, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, some voices wold help aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but has some humor, needs more to it more story...

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[THEND]

((( ABIT STRANGE )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was abit strange, nice artwork though, love the shading and different effects, lots of effort and detail shown which was a real plus, the song did keep playing after the cartoon endded, might want to look into it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some characters, something besides the house and car...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting abit strange at first, nice music and art...

~X~

[-FourSteps-]

((( LOTS OF COLOR )))

~~REVIEW~~
This has promise, it ended too short, started out great with all the color and the ok music, just ended so fast, wish it had more going on, nice job though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer,a nd you may want to have some better quality on the sound it was abit scratchy...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but good start, love the use of color kinda artistic...

~X~

M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the review;
I only made it 30 seconds long because the original advert was 30 seconds long.

[The Mourner]

((( VERY SLOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda not that good, i man the "CHARACTERS" were great and lots of detail, but very little animation, it also looped which was not good, might want to work out the bugs on this one...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash

~~OVERALL~~
Loops and was very slow needs some work...

~X~