XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[RC:Trailer]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
That seemed to short for a trailer, needed more, and more scenes besides just the clocks more on what to expect, kinda neat though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well to be a good trailer it needs to have more detail and more info on the full version, while its a trailer it should be short but still give enough scenes, story plot, and characters info and give the viewers something to want to look forward to the full version...

~~OVERALL~~
Short trailer more like a clock profile thingy well 3-4 of them anyways...

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Thomas responds:

Haha,thanks for your response,but I feel I have wasted your time.This was just a preteen fantasy that never came to be...and never will.

[Ronin Warriors Pass Gas]

((( TV ?? )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this seems like it was taken right from the tv or something even the net hmmm, the screen was also very small which in most cases it is when taken from the original source....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should have atleast added some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Straight from tv to flash...

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[Nordic Nights Music Video]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i like the idea of clips and all, but the file was way to large, the effects well they could have been better, it was ok but needs more efort and time, and some compressing all around...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file maybe into two different parts...

~~OVERALL~~
Clips sorta and some effects kinda neat....

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[The Installation]

((( I LIKE IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cool, i liked it, the characters were abit funny and odd, aswell as the voices, but that with the story all worked out just fine so props to you on the first full animation it was good...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would only suggest make more like in a series of some sort, nice job...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters and neat story, keep it up...

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[CD beats up A Polish Man]

((( VERY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was very short, something i would normaly see on a colab or something, it just was not long enough to enjoy it all the way through...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
short and simple, but kinda funny at the same time...

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[Jackson and James: Part 3]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ok this made me laugh, the art and graphics was a nice touch, i was very impressed, and for the "VOICES" notbad either very well done, you may want to think about adding some subtitles, for an overall better effect, but great animation so-far...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some "SUBTITLES" might help...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters great voicing and awsome backrounds...

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[Link To The Past Part 2]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok these are funny, this one seemed to freeze up at times though, may want to look into that, but overall it was funny and made me laugh so nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backrounds besides the white bland ones...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny in another classic episode...

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[kill vill i - (english)]

((( GOOD STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very good, i really liked it, lots of interesting stuff, it was abit confusing on the wording at times but still ok to understand so it was ok, i really like dthe flash and think you should make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit better detail on the wording of things...

~~OVERALL~~
A very well balanced flash, nice stuff indeed...

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[Bureau of Justice: Ep 2]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was sorta neat, the characters were interesting, but with that and what was going on it made for an ok story, more stuff should be happening though, and more effects in the backrounds would be nice aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like the characters and adding some effects would help aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash, funny characters and an all around ok flash...

~X~