XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Osama: Nowhere To Run]

((( IT LOOPS BUT ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Besides its looping it was funny, the "MUSIC" was very entertaining the singing i mean, abit short but good entertainment funny stuff, you should upgrade this with a longer version or something, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny old flash, might want to fix the looping though...

~X~

[Kalter Kaffee]

((( IT WAS INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was interesting ill give you that but tends to get abit dry at the end, i just didnt like the ending much, but i do like the "BLACK & WHITE" it was a long download which was about the only other thing i didnt like abouot it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k...

~~OVERALL~~
Abit large on the file but it had some interesting points throughout the flash...

~X~

[Kingdom Hearts Keyholder2]

((( GOOD STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
Good stuff, very fun i enjoyed it from start to finish, allthough it was a big file i still enjoyed it, Did you know in the clubs and crews forum there is a club for requesting voice actors you could look there, anyways grat flash, loved it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much besides lowering the filesize...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun flash, lots to see and have fun with, hope to see more of this sometime...

~X~

gumOnShoe responds:

I knew about the voice actors club. I went to them and had some try outs but got busy and left them hanging, totally my fault... I still feel bad about the whole incident.

I couldn't figure out what to do to lower filesize, it would have meant really bad sound like in the first movie...

New stuff coming out next time...

[Cellularphones & car ads]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this did remind me of all them comercials, they dont bother me that much, but i know what your getting at, as for the flash it was funny and shows some effort on your part, maybe not so big of a file size next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Phone and car ads they cant get worse hehe...

~X~

[ajao]

((( HMMMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well first off the window size was way to small, couldnt even see anything, well maybe a few things but it was hard to see due to the window size, and the file size it self was abit much aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger window size, and some compressing of the file would be a start...

~~OVERALL~~
What can i say it was hard to view, due to the artists in proper size of the window...

~X~

[333333]

((( STRANGE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was strange especialy starting with the bathroom, i guess the "SOUND/FX" helped for more entertainment but it was all random and strange, i did get a laugh out of it so it was ok...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less strange would be ok...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and random, will get you a good laugh though...

~X~

["Death" of an artist]

((( UM OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, abit sloppy on the art, not sure that you can blam his movies since they always won awards, but as for this flash it was ok, seemed abit sloppy, i dod however like the song, and the funny characters did make me laugh...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better effort and skill is needed, more detail within the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters good song, not much more then that...

~X~

[An Ol' Soot]

((( STRANGE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit strange for me, i do like how you did that the animation, also looked as if you made it on paper first??? it was ok just abit strange, does give you a laugh though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stuff in the backround would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and different, kinda strange though...

~X~

[Asura]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, it had alot of interest for me, it the story i mean was really good, and the detail was notbad either, i would have liked to see more like in a continueing story or something, the size was abit much though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file somewhat,...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent story, has lots of promise for future works...

~X~

Poison-Rat responds:

yes

[Apache -]

((( IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow very good detail and awsome from the start to finish, i even watched it twice it was that good, loved the dark seeting and feel it had, made it like a real movie almost, nice job indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its perfect as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Very impressive flash, from start to finish, great effects good story, and awsome action, great flash...

~X~