XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FUN QUESTION MARK #3@@@@@]

((( WELL )))

~~REVIEW~~
WEll it was very poorly made, the idea behind it well i hope it never happened because thats really messed up if it did, also i noticed you had no "REPLAY" button at the end, might want to fix that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a "REPLAY" button, makes it hard for users to rewatch it if they dont know how to...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny joke, but not for the other guy...

~X~

[Your Alternative Choice]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok made me laugh, good set-up to the joke, you should probably add a "PLAY" button at the start though, it was funny so nice job on getting me to fall for the joke, anyways make it longer next time...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer but with the same theme of the joke...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny joke, good art though...

~X~

[loljesusdiedwow]

((( HMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this is probably just a clip from the cartoon itself, you should have done some of the work like make some characters and so-on, the "CLIP" also looped and it gets anoying with the audio after awhile...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make something of your own then submit it, something you would be proud to submit...

~~OVERALL~~
A clip from some anime cartoon, no reall effort here...

~X~

[Luigi's Bad Luck]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok made me laugh, it did "LOOP" over and over so you may want to get that looked into, but it was funny and smooth animation so notbad, i enjoyed it, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer more mishaps, and also, You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Short mishaps of luigi, abit short though...

~X~

[Love]

((( IT WAS CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was a cute yet simple flash, had some nice flowing music to it which was cool, i wished there was some backrounds besides the blank ones, and some more color would have been nice aswell, but overall it was ok, i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color, some sorta backdrop with color and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A simple little flash very cute like and funny to the end...

~X~

[people vs zombie]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
First off the file was very large not all of us have fast computers, so just something to think about, about the flash it needs lots of detail stuff up front and the backrounds, lots more time and effort is need, hope it gets better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress that large file thatw as just massive...

~~OVERALL~~
A very large file, and needs some effort towards the animation and graphics, better luck next time...

~X~

[My name is Bill]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, made me laugh abit, good character and really liked the flowing backround, as for the audio it was abit hard to hear but still ok, maybe turn up the volume or something, it was good though, nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the volume abit louder if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny audio of caller, and some decent artwork...

~X~

[OK JUNIOR]

((( VERY NICE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice work on this one, it kept me interested, and the "B&W" was not bad but some color would have been nice, love the detailed drawings, and effects makes it all unique somehow, very nice work, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
Black and white flash but with style, big file but well worth the wait, i suggest everyone watch this one...

~X~