XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Singin' In The Rain-]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
I like the smooth animating, and the differrent color chnges, i still think there should have been something more like some props in the backround or even some trees maybe even some "RAIN" effects...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some rain effects would be good to match the title...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat animating, cool colors nice job, hope to see more...

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[This Beautyful Offspring]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was very slow but notbad at all, the sketchy like drawings were cool, and the shadings here and therew as even better, as for the story it was strange but interesting, nice little flash here...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the animation abit faster or smoother...

~~OVERALL~~
Slow and strange but the end was funny, nice job...

~X~

KRLA responds:

Yes, I agree. This was my second flash ever. The first one got blammed imidietly. I´ll keep your tips in mind when messing around. I´m just learning at the moment. Thanks

[Clerks Cartoon 1]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
I have the first few episodes of the real cartoon on dvd, its very funny, nice presentaion of the characters, and good idea of the english version of the store hehe, the audio is what drove this and made it funny, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer or make more episodes for it...

~~OVERALL~~
Clerks coming to a store near you hehe...

~X~

[MOO?]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok now that was funny, you should have had the cow go "MOOOOOOO" at the end and then run off hehe, anyways funny toon, and some really good "VOICE-OVERS" not much animation but it was fine as the joke was funny as hell nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit longer and more of the joke to give it that humor...

~~OVERALL~~
A cow or is it a bull? hehe funny toon here everyone needs to watch this one, good stuff...

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[E-Ticit]

((( LOVE THE COLORS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat for the reds and black colors kinda making it artistic in a way, it did loop and that got anoying after awhile, also nice music in the backrounds, but you should fix the looping of the flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the looping, you need to add a stop action code so it wont loop, aswell as some play and replay buttons...

~~OVERALL~~
Artistis in the way of the color...

~X~

[Stone Trek: Episode 1]

((( AWW THE FIRST )))

~~REVIEW~~
So this is the first episode cool cool, i still say the first is the best one, but it does have some humor, the "SOUND" seems to drop out about half way, you may want to look into that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them longer, and more close ups of the heads...

~~OVERALL~~
Episode one of a great series awsome toons here...

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[FRANQ]

((( UM OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, seems like it is unfinished somehow, also i didnt notice any play or replay buttons, thats something you may want to work on, as for the moving head it was cute, but not much more then that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation, some play and replay buttons aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Simple cute but needs work...

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[HEAT MAN Dr. Zaius!]

((( ENTERTAINING VIDEO )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol well it was like a video and was entertaining, i noticed the "PHIL HEARTMAN" lines from "SNL" that was funny, the sprites did look abit blocky, and the mouths were ok but could be better, funny video i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better looking mouths, and sharper looking sprites would be some improving...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and like a music video, needs some fix's here and there, keep up the good work...

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[Buy Me A Pony]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha it was entertaining, abit random at times but funny, the jpegs were ok, the white backrounds could have had some detail or even some jpegs themself, funny song to go with the random images...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stuff in the base backround besides the white backdrop...

~~OVERALL~~
Random and lots of jpegs, lots of wacky stuff here...

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[birdies]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was cute, nice color, the screen did seem abit small, and the flash itself seemed to freeze up now and then, it was cute though, nice try at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger screen, even some borders around the screen would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute and good use of color...

~X~