XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[beast]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok kinda stopped in the middle, froze i mean, anyways the backround jpegs were ok, and as for the guy running kinda neat, i like the mixture of toon and jpeg kinda neat, other then that it was just ok...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure it was sorta strange...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange but sorta neat...

~X~

dus10 responds:

well it was for a school priject with a one week time limit, so the fact that u even came close to enjoying it puts a smile on my face, thanks!

[Attempt]

((( NEEDS LOTS OF WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok but could have been much better, you had an ok idea but it needs more effort and you need to learn to compress or cut it down in parts, that would be the first step to a better flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the 4 + meg file that was abit much...

~~OVERALL~~
Very big file which was not needed and seems like not much effort went into this on your part...

~X~

[Attack On The Glocks 2]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i had some interest in it, it could use some more detail especialy in the backrounds, aswell as some flashy effects, but i was entertained with it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file, and add some backround effects that pazazz the viewers...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining, needs more effects though...

~X~

[Army Thing]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well notbad, i kinda liked it, it had some areas that were kinda bland, but it was cool to see, and notbad work for your first, i hope you decide to make more and present us with improved artworks, nice job here, its decent...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and lower the size of the file, its not bad but is getting up there abit...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but fun and neat, needs some detail here and there...

~X~

[Archangel- Total War]

((( GOOD ACTION )))

~~REVIEW~~
Aww sticks but something different cool, the "BOW/ARROWS" was a nice touch and probably what made it different then the blatent sticks and guns, and very good music choice to flow with the animation, nice job, i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing here it was just right...

~~OVERALL~~
Very clever and good idea with the bows sticks but with a twist, great film...

~X~

[Stone Trek: Episode 3]

((( GREAT STUFF AGAIN )))

~~REVIEW~~
I just saw the other one and couldnt stop laughing, and this one was just as good great art like abckrounds and good characters, and very funny made me laugh lile the last one nice work indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing these are perfect and should be on tv...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny series and great voice-overs, make mor eplease...

~X~

[a SUPER joint]

((( LOL CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was cute, at first i didint know what was going on but then the end results clued me in hehe, i think the music really fit well as it had a "60's" kinda hippy type of flash hehe anyways nice work, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be abit longer like more scenes of where the guy goes around town finding new "HOT" spots...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny clever and entertaining, nice job...

~X~

[The Tooth]

((( STRANG CHARACTERS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was an old joke but you presented it well, i love the strange and odd characters, and the tones color was a nice touch aswell, it was abit short but was still entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it just abit longer with some more ending to the tooth and all...

~~OVERALL~~
An old tooth joke presented very funny with some strange but neat characters...

~X~

[The Viking Car]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny, abit short and kinda strange in exactly what they were doing, but it was entertaining, made me laugh, just add a bit more to the ending, funny stuff though, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, even some smoother animation would be nice, and maybe even some "SUBTITLES" when they were talking at the start...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animation, and good GNR song to go with the animation...

~X~