XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SaintStick]

((( STICKS HMMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well cant say i know of the characters or show they came from but you did an ok job even if

it was sticks, but i would suggest getting away from that and into some real characters, i

did however like the "MUSIC" and the action was notbad either, nice work indeed, hope to see

more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More refined characters, sticks are ok but the quality will show from real characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat flash some decent action, and good music...

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[The sweetie shop]

((( LOL BRILIANT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha man i was not expecting this to be that good at first i saw the "GRAPHICS" and was like wtf, but as i got into it the story made up for it, allthugh it was abit short you really put effort to make it good, i supose the simple characters work with a brilliant idea and some decen "VOICING" to go along with, so props to you on a very welldone flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and make more episodes like different things happening to different people...

~~OVERALL~~
This lacks in art, but proves worthy in story and sound/fx, a must see by all flash fans...

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[Sad knights]

((( TOO SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was just way to short seems like it would go better in a colab of some sort, just not by itself, as for the flash it was funny kinda hard to understand what was being said so maybe some subtitles, funny stuff though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was abit hard to understand what was being said by the characters, so i would suggest adding some "SUBTITLES" to know exactly what the dialog is, it will improve on the flash, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short short, funny but short...

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[Scarecrow]

((( VERY IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very impressive, so for that you get all 10's from me, and congrats on the daily 4rt i cans ee why you got it so nice job there, anyways it was really good from the smooth animating to the sharp looking art detail very well done...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
A great animation very sharp looking...

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[Shit Happens...]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad animation, its just ok, needs more to it more art detail like on the characters, and i would even go as far as to changing the music that just wasnent fitting right with me, also more effects in the backrounds would be neat, anyways good luck...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better music, more detail, and longer if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation but needs more effort and work...

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[The Pygmy Shrew]

((( NEAT STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, some really good voicing seem to fit perfect for the content ha a schrew hehe, some nice animation aswell as anamal designs very good work on this, also neat how there was 3 different viewings on the matter, anyways nice job, hope to see more in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is...

~~OVERALL~~
Ha this was neat and some really nice artwork to go with...

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[Totally Madness]

((( NEEDS MUCH MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
WEll if it was a test of some sort you could have put it on a free web host site or something, but it was way to short and right when it was getting good i mean it was smoother then most good action. besides the sticks it was really neat just needs more of a story or plot and not something that ends 4 seconds into it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and work on some character designs sticks are just um.... well you know...

~~OVERALL~~
A short but very smooth stick scene or something lol...

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Zielak responds:

thx, now go wach FULL version ;)

[people vs zombies part2]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, but needs more to it, maybe some detail some effects and just little things here and there to give it that extra something that makes flash avg to awsome...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize somewhat it was dragging...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but needs more detail and some compressing...

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[Lethal Personality]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i liked, kinda reminds me of all them DBZ flash that comes through the portal, very neat, the characters were drawn well, and the animation was decent, even had some nice backrounds, nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more "STORY" and more characters...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash with some good characters good backrounds, nice work keep it up...

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