XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Naruto adventure 1]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, allthough you could do abit better with the text bubbles as they were abit plain, some decent action with the sprite and all but overall could be improved...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better looking sprites, some bettre looking fonts and text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun sprite flash, but could be much better...

~X~

[The Intro Remake]

((( FUNNY BUT NEEDS MORE DETAIL )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, but as for the "CHARACTERS" lol i would put abit more effort on them, maybe some more detail in the faces, you did show some great animating skill, it ran really smooth which was cool, just needs more work on the characters and such...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better characters, more focus on them, and more detail in what to expect in a full version...

~~OVERALL~~
Its a start just needs more detail and more on what to expect on a full version, nice job though...

~X~

[Phone Booth 2]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok for one of your first flash's but could use more effort all around, the animation could be abit smoother, and more detail and effort in the graphics is needed aswell, nice try though, hope to see improvements sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, more detail and most of all more time and effort before submitting...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash just needs more time and effort throught the film...

~X~

[World of Ymca]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, probably could use some details here and there, i like the idea, and its sorta funny, just needs more effort, it had a certain entertaining value, also could use some compressing it was abit much, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file somewhat, and add some detail here and there and the backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting story sorta short but entertaining enough...

~X~

[incubus]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this reminded me of "RING" the flashing to the girl like character hehe, there wasent much "SOUND/FX" or music it was very low though, it was funny becuse it did remind me of the ring, notbad animation though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More louder music and more sound/fx, some sorta dialog would help understand the situation aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat flash, if you like the ring you will enjoy this...

~X~

[super demon 1]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, i was entertained, and it had some decent action from start to the end so i was pleased, i wouldnt mind seeing more effects here and there but overall it was neat, nice job, next time let your friend submit it though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Abit more effects, and some compressing would help aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash some ok action fun flash...

~X~

[This Is Serious Mum! pt.1]

((( LOVE THE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i was really impressed with the graphics and detail especcialy the characters, from the eyes to the bodies, aswell as the backrounds to the tv set very cool effects to go along with nice graphics, awsome job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some "SUBTITLES" just for that overall effect of it all...

~~OVERALL~~
Great looking flash awsome graphics nice detail and cool story...

~X~

[Ventures into Insanity]

((( NOTBAD AT ALL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm i sorta liked this one, Well it was entertaining, but i think it lacked in detail and effects, just little things here and there, effects that make it stand-out more, but it was funny which gave me a good laugh or two, more time and effort with better use of the full flash to your advantage will make this much better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More details here and there could be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash abit different then other stuff but still kinda neat...

~X~

Pythian-Habenero responds:

Thanks! Don't worry, if I ever get around to making a second Flash, more detail will be included. Cheers.