XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[pirate rap]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL haha ok that was neat, the "CHARACTER" was decent with a funny rap, and some decent backrounds and props, a funny animation good song hehe, you should make more if you can...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny song, good characters and animation...

~X~

[Stikfas Stealth Mission]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, could be better though, more effort and time with some surrounding flashy effects would be cool, and the music well not my fav ebut didnt seem like it fit well with what was going on, it was entertaining though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more effort in effects and some compressing aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat idea and fun action but needs more to it...

~X~

[Stick fighter (MONSTER)]

((( COMPRESS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well needs some compressing, actually needs lots of compressing, it was just too huge for the little content, but if you are going to submit something as huge you should spend abit more time with setailing all aspects of it from character like characters and detailed backrounds...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, but most of all some compressing of the huge file...

~~OVERALL~~
A large file with little detail and content...

~X~

[Super Luigi World Part 1]

((( ABIT BLAND )))

~~REVIEW~~
Seemed sorta bland, mostly because the story was not that much to it, it just needed more time and effort, mainly on the story, you should think about making a new and longer version, anyways better luck next time..

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort and time, more to the story, and abit better effects aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Mario or luigi heh, anyways this started out good but needs more story effort...

~X~

[Youve Been Robbed!]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, abit huge and file size, love the art and characters though, its very impressive, from start to finish it had great animation, but the huge file is my only issue with it, nice job, hope to see more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was just perfect great animation funny homor and smooth characters nice job...

~~OVERALL~~
Perfect except the huge file, very funny aswell...

~X~

[Naruto adventure 1]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, allthough you could do abit better with the text bubbles as they were abit plain, some decent action with the sprite and all but overall could be improved...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better looking sprites, some bettre looking fonts and text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun sprite flash, but could be much better...

~X~

[The Intro Remake]

((( FUNNY BUT NEEDS MORE DETAIL )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, but as for the "CHARACTERS" lol i would put abit more effort on them, maybe some more detail in the faces, you did show some great animating skill, it ran really smooth which was cool, just needs more work on the characters and such...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better characters, more focus on them, and more detail in what to expect in a full version...

~~OVERALL~~
Its a start just needs more detail and more on what to expect on a full version, nice job though...

~X~

[Phone Booth 2]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok for one of your first flash's but could use more effort all around, the animation could be abit smoother, and more detail and effort in the graphics is needed aswell, nice try though, hope to see improvements sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, more detail and most of all more time and effort before submitting...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash just needs more time and effort throught the film...

~X~

[World of Ymca]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, probably could use some details here and there, i like the idea, and its sorta funny, just needs more effort, it had a certain entertaining value, also could use some compressing it was abit much, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file somewhat, and add some detail here and there and the backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting story sorta short but entertaining enough...

~X~