XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Metal Slug Virus 2]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad on this one, i have seen many slug flashworks all good and all funny and with lots of action, as for this one it could use some better text lines? maybe better yet some text bubbles, anyways funny flash and good action...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Slugs cant get better then that...

~X~

[CarlLan Collab - SE]

((( NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Nice graphics, it was nice to see some effort in the art and detail, something some people dont do alot of, but anyways good animation, not as smooth as i would have liked but still good, i had fun with this animation, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation but not by much...

~~OVERALL~~
Good flash, entertaining and some decent effort shown in the art detail...

~X~

[Climbing Trees 2/2]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, it was entertaining, the filesize was abit large though, took ages to finaly get there, but anyways nice flash i had fun with it, just be sure to make it not so large next time hehe....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Filesize, and some added effects...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining, may even give you a laugh or two...

~X~

[Clownin Around]

((( NEAT IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea, with the clowns and all, and some really good use of color and such, very entertaining, i hope you made a series out of it it ha style to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More episodes and more clowning hehe...

~~OVERALL~~
Clowns color and more hehe...

~X~

[Forsaken]

((( NICE EFFECTS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice effects with the lighting and such, also nice touch with the sound/fx semed to match the flow of animation nicely, also seemed like a sorta music video, but that made it more entertaining, anyways nice flash, i hope to see more in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More full body shots of the characters and some dialog woyld help aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
If you love effects and great sounds this is the flash for you...

~X~

[In Heaven]

((( DECENT COULD USE MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was pleasent, the song really set the tone, the angl babies were cute, and it was just refreshing, maybe ad abit more like a sorta story or something, nice flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to it lik a story or something, and more scenes, maybe even some dialog between the two angel babies...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute angels in heaven flash notbad at all, keep it up...

~X~

[Desert Garden]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
I actually liked the song, it did however seem slow, and the guy didnt move much you should have him walk down an aisle or something and show the crowd he is singing to, and subtitles wouldnt hurt...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes in the flash, with more animation from the character, and All though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...

~~OVERALL~~
Good video almost like your there in front of him kinda neat flash...

~X~

[DOGGIE OUT THE WINDOW]

((( ABIT SHORT BUT FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok it was funny but it was so short you should add it along with a few other shorts, but anyways, it was entertaining in a bazar way, the dog looked alot like the dog from the "SIMPSONS" heh anyways you should make more types and stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and maybe not so brutal on the dog next time...

~~OVERALL~~
If you like dogs dont watch this lol...

~X~

[Ham Abuse]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha made me laugh abit, i was like "OUCH" at the end of it hehe, seemed abit short and i didnt really understand what was going on like who are these people why did the one guy let the other guy push him?? heh well it was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and some voice-overs from the characters would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but odd toon, may or may-not give a few laughs...

~X~

Crusty-Wiwuh responds:

All true. I was playing around when I made it, which is really what most of my submissions are. I really don't know if I'll ever make something with an actual plot and storyboard...

I'm playing with lip syncing and voices atm though, so expect some of that in future submissions.

Thanks for another decent review.