XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Seven Day's short -.-]

((( NICE PRELOADER )))

~~REVIEW~~
I must say that preloader was very intense, dont get me wrong so was the story and characters in the animation but that was a great preloader heh, but anyways good story some good characters with decent detail to them...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters and some more detail in the backround would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
good effort great preloader and lots of fun in this animation...

~X~

[Squibblez - Moon]

((( LOL AGAIN )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny maybe not as much as the others but still entertaining, i wish you had more depth to them like backrounds and characters though, anyways nice work on the series its funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth in effects backrounds and characters...

~~OVERALL~~
Bland...

~X~

[The Long Walk Home]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well not mmuch on this it was entertaining, well the flashing and revelotion and stuff, seems like it should have been longer or something, funny but odd...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something more then just the flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Flashing ahead be warned...

~X~

Rabid-Echidna responds:

((( Hey there )))

~~~~~~~~~~~~~I thought this movie was ok, I don't really see the point of it but I have to review it anyway because I review everything even when I really don't have much to say about it.~~~~~~~~~~

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[Squibblez - Hill]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha another one of these silly things thats funny, the colortone was neat but i still dont like the odd text bubles, you should add more to it or some texture or something, anyways the story was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random...

~X~

[Phenomanal Story : Marvin]

((( GREAT STORY )))

~~REVIEW~~
First off great story and even better characters, this made me laugha ll the way to the end, shows lots of effort and skill i especialy like the detail and good effects, aswell as some awsome color use, great flash from start to finish, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as it was perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
Great story good animation,a nd funny characters...

~X~

[The Home - Part 1 "3mins"]

((( INTERETING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was interesting, kinda funny infact, also had a strange feel to it, maybe its just me though, but anyways the flash was notbad could use abit more details here and there, but besides that it was notbad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cut the file down, and add more funny humor to it...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat kinda strange but funny...

~X~

[Zelda nintedo 1st draft 2]

((( STILL TO BIG )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it is still to large in file so compressit somewhat, but as for the flash it was neat, maybe i should see the other one first though, anyways it was fun i liked it, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it smaller if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun zelda like game, lotsof fun...

~X~

[Zero's Mission]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad could be better though, seemed abit hard to understand, but i did like it, and it had an entertainingvalue to iy, could use some compressing though, anyways nice job, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compressing of the file...

~~OVERALL~~
Some decent action in this one abit large though...

~X~

[The Battle On ROCK]

((( NEAT BUT COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad animation but could be better, but you did present some nice graphics like the backrounds, and the "BATTLE" was notbad, but the sticks them could use some more detail, and the animatiion could be slightly longer...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the animation abit longer and, The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Good action, nice art but characters need detail...

~X~