XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stick fighter (MONSTER)]

((( COMPRESS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well needs some compressing, actually needs lots of compressing, it was just too huge for the little content, but if you are going to submit something as huge you should spend abit more time with setailing all aspects of it from character like characters and detailed backrounds...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, but most of all some compressing of the huge file...

~~OVERALL~~
A large file with little detail and content...

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[Super Luigi World Part 1]

((( ABIT BLAND )))

~~REVIEW~~
Seemed sorta bland, mostly because the story was not that much to it, it just needed more time and effort, mainly on the story, you should think about making a new and longer version, anyways better luck next time..

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort and time, more to the story, and abit better effects aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Mario or luigi heh, anyways this started out good but needs more story effort...

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[Youve Been Robbed!]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, abit huge and file size, love the art and characters though, its very impressive, from start to finish it had great animation, but the huge file is my only issue with it, nice job, hope to see more...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was just perfect great animation funny homor and smooth characters nice job...

~~OVERALL~~
Perfect except the huge file, very funny aswell...

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[Naruto adventure 1]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, allthough you could do abit better with the text bubbles as they were abit plain, some decent action with the sprite and all but overall could be improved...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better looking sprites, some bettre looking fonts and text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun sprite flash, but could be much better...

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[The Intro Remake]

((( FUNNY BUT NEEDS MORE DETAIL )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, but as for the "CHARACTERS" lol i would put abit more effort on them, maybe some more detail in the faces, you did show some great animating skill, it ran really smooth which was cool, just needs more work on the characters and such...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better characters, more focus on them, and more detail in what to expect in a full version...

~~OVERALL~~
Its a start just needs more detail and more on what to expect on a full version, nice job though...

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[Phone Booth 2]

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok for one of your first flash's but could use more effort all around, the animation could be abit smoother, and more detail and effort in the graphics is needed aswell, nice try though, hope to see improvements sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation, more detail and most of all more time and effort before submitting...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok flash just needs more time and effort throught the film...

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[World of Ymca]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, probably could use some details here and there, i like the idea, and its sorta funny, just needs more effort, it had a certain entertaining value, also could use some compressing it was abit much, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file somewhat, and add some detail here and there and the backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting story sorta short but entertaining enough...

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[incubus]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this reminded me of "RING" the flashing to the girl like character hehe, there wasent much "SOUND/FX" or music it was very low though, it was funny becuse it did remind me of the ring, notbad animation though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More louder music and more sound/fx, some sorta dialog would help understand the situation aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat flash, if you like the ring you will enjoy this...

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[super demon 1]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was ok, i was entertained, and it had some decent action from start to the end so i was pleased, i wouldnt mind seeing more effects here and there but overall it was neat, nice job, next time let your friend submit it though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Abit more effects, and some compressing would help aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash some ok action fun flash...

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