XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Luigi Blows a Dead Dog]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this ended before i can see much, meaning it was way to short, didnt even make sense, also seems abit sloppy like with the close ups and such, also the "TEXT BUBBLES" were very small and hard to read...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and add better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random but way to short...

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[Otaku Hunter -Quickie-]

((( WELL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it did give me abit of a chuckle but there was still too much jpeg use in the flash more toon characters would have been better, and made it more entertaining, more longer of a clip aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more characters and less jpeg usage...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but needs more to it...

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[The Man Without Fear]

((( NOTBAD COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad of an animation, it could be better with some flashy effects especialy in the backrounds, and also it needs some compression of the file that was just abit above the avg, but as for the flash itself it was neat, i liked the idea, just needs abit more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some flashy effects,and some compressing of the file would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash, and neat idea, but needs some more work to it especialy some compressing 0f the file, anyways nice job, keep it up....

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["Speed"]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, made me laugh, i like the whole black and white feel then the bit of color was nice aswell, it was a short but funny stick animation, you should think of some real character work, anyways nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the
character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute, could use some better characters though, anyways nice animation...

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[the sonic show 1.5]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one, not sure about the first one but this was neat and some good action, i do think you need to cut it down abit more though, but i like the action knuckles hehe, anyways nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun action, but abit large in file...

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[Metal Slug Virus 2]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad on this one, i have seen many slug flashworks all good and all funny and with lots of action, as for this one it could use some better text lines? maybe better yet some text bubbles, anyways funny flash and good action...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Slugs cant get better then that...

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[CarlLan Collab - SE]

((( NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Nice graphics, it was nice to see some effort in the art and detail, something some people dont do alot of, but anyways good animation, not as smooth as i would have liked but still good, i had fun with this animation, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation but not by much...

~~OVERALL~~
Good flash, entertaining and some decent effort shown in the art detail...

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[Climbing Trees 2/2]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, it was entertaining, the filesize was abit large though, took ages to finaly get there, but anyways nice flash i had fun with it, just be sure to make it not so large next time hehe....

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Filesize, and some added effects...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining, may even give you a laugh or two...

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[Clownin Around]

((( NEAT IDEA )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea, with the clowns and all, and some really good use of color and such, very entertaining, i hope you made a series out of it it ha style to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More episodes and more clowning hehe...

~~OVERALL~~
Clowns color and more hehe...

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