XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Forsaken]

((( NICE EFFECTS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice effects with the lighting and such, also nice touch with the sound/fx semed to match the flow of animation nicely, also seemed like a sorta music video, but that made it more entertaining, anyways nice flash, i hope to see more in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More full body shots of the characters and some dialog woyld help aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
If you love effects and great sounds this is the flash for you...

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[In Heaven]

((( DECENT COULD USE MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was pleasent, the song really set the tone, the angl babies were cute, and it was just refreshing, maybe ad abit more like a sorta story or something, nice flash though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to it lik a story or something, and more scenes, maybe even some dialog between the two angel babies...

~~OVERALL~~
Cute angels in heaven flash notbad at all, keep it up...

~X~

[Desert Garden]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
I actually liked the song, it did however seem slow, and the guy didnt move much you should have him walk down an aisle or something and show the crowd he is singing to, and subtitles wouldnt hurt...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes in the flash, with more animation from the character, and All though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...

~~OVERALL~~
Good video almost like your there in front of him kinda neat flash...

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[DOGGIE OUT THE WINDOW]

((( ABIT SHORT BUT FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok it was funny but it was so short you should add it along with a few other shorts, but anyways, it was entertaining in a bazar way, the dog looked alot like the dog from the "SIMPSONS" heh anyways you should make more types and stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and maybe not so brutal on the dog next time...

~~OVERALL~~
If you like dogs dont watch this lol...

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[Ham Abuse]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha made me laugh abit, i was like "OUCH" at the end of it hehe, seemed abit short and i didnt really understand what was going on like who are these people why did the one guy let the other guy push him?? heh well it was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and some voice-overs from the characters would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but odd toon, may or may-not give a few laughs...

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Crusty-Wiwuh responds:

All true. I was playing around when I made it, which is really what most of my submissions are. I really don't know if I'll ever make something with an actual plot and storyboard...

I'm playing with lip syncing and voices atm though, so expect some of that in future submissions.

Thanks for another decent review.

[SMB : The Koopa King Pt.1]

((( I LIKE IT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was really good, starts off with a good story and carries on more from it, also liked all the sprites very sharp looking, the file was abit large, but still worth the wait for the fun animation, and all...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the file size as much as you can...

~~OVERALL~~
Sprites and bowser what more can we expect from this very entertaining sprite flash...

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Rudy responds:

ahh thanks :] I'm going to finish this with a sequel very soon, I still gotta start it. It may take some time though.

It will be better, with a lower file size. And 10x more dialogue. Voice acting too.

[The Madness Of Madness!]

((( COOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all, allthough i have seen a many of these madness, this one did present some good action, with lots going on in the short ness of the fash, you could compress the file somewhat though it was abit large...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
a madness flash...

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[Master Highro]

((( AWSOME CLAY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow that was very good claywork, the "CHARACTER" was perfect not just some mold that someone put together in about 5 min, and the animation was decent for the scenes, wish there was a few more scenes and stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes, maybe even another clay character to interact with...

~~OVERALL~~
A great clay character, and some decent animation, could be longer though...

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[Sphere Fight 6]

((( WOW IMPRESSIVE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow that was very fun, very fast-paced, lots of action, and some really great detail love teh different camera shots, gives it a really good feel to it, and the music just made it that much better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would leave it as is its brilliant, maybe make more episodes just because they are of high quality...

~~OVERALL~~
A fast-paced flash, great music and lots of good action...

~X~