XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Squibblez - Hill]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha another one of these silly things thats funny, the colortone was neat but i still dont like the odd text bubles, you should add more to it or some texture or something, anyways the story was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better text bubbles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random...

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[Phenomanal Story : Marvin]

((( GREAT STORY )))

~~REVIEW~~
First off great story and even better characters, this made me laugha ll the way to the end, shows lots of effort and skill i especialy like the detail and good effects, aswell as some awsome color use, great flash from start to finish, hope to see more sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as it was perfect...

~~OVERALL~~
Great story good animation,a nd funny characters...

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[The Home - Part 1 "3mins"]

((( INTERETING )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was interesting, kinda funny infact, also had a strange feel to it, maybe its just me though, but anyways the flash was notbad could use abit more details here and there, but besides that it was notbad...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cut the file down, and add more funny humor to it...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat kinda strange but funny...

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[Zelda nintedo 1st draft 2]

((( STILL TO BIG )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it is still to large in file so compressit somewhat, but as for the flash it was neat, maybe i should see the other one first though, anyways it was fun i liked it, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it smaller if you can...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun zelda like game, lotsof fun...

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[Zero's Mission]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad could be better though, seemed abit hard to understand, but i did like it, and it had an entertainingvalue to iy, could use some compressing though, anyways nice job, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compressing of the file...

~~OVERALL~~
Some decent action in this one abit large though...

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[The Battle On ROCK]

((( NEAT BUT COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad animation but could be better, but you did present some nice graphics like the backrounds, and the "BATTLE" was notbad, but the sticks them could use some more detail, and the animatiion could be slightly longer...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the animation abit longer and, The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Good action, nice art but characters need detail...

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[Xmen battles]

((( WOW X-MEN SPRITES )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i dont think i have seen any x-men sprite flashes but anyways lots of action and lots of x-men, and the ending was great with the mixture of flash effects and sprites, nice job indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more episodes such as this with x-men sprites...

~~OVERALL~~
A great unique sprite flash, nice animation...

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deadpool15 responds:

oh whoa thanks it was the co author who helped out with the flash effects.

I kinda forgot about making a sequel about this but your review made me consider it again thanks

[ying]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, it was visually great and high quality, but it was hard to understand maybe its just me but maybe more variations should be made, notbad of what you did here but could be better...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file......

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash visually but needs more effort and some compressing of the file...

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[How Fights Start]

((( SIMPLE BUT CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was simple but very cute with the sticks and all, you should have added some sorta backround though, the idea was neat, and made me laugh, funny animation keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland...

~~OVERALL~~
Simple and cute, and good pleasent music aswell, not a bad flash at all...

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Sticky responds:

I didn't add a background because it would've interfered with the simple stick style i was going for but i understand what you mean......

nice review btw....