XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rise of the Horde]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaining, but i think it lacked in detail and effects, just little things here and there, effects that make it stand-out more, but it was decent which gave me a good feel about it more time and effort with better use of the visuals and scenes to your advantage will make this much better, i did enjoy it, it just needs some work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Little things like details, but mostly some compression as it was very large and took time to DL...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting and decen but needs more effort...

~X~

[Stone Tablets]

((( VERY NICE GRAPHICS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Some very nice graphics and effects like the lightning and clouds in the backround, the "VOICES" were really great but i think subtitles would still be something neat to have, also some different scenes would make it much better aswell, but anyways great character designs nice effects and neat flash, keep up the great work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, And Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting...

~~OVERALL~~
Love teh characters and effect, which was the best part of this so im sure many will also like this very nice flash awsome work people...

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[STARFOX: Mission Complete]

((( VERY FUNNY AND GOOD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this was good because its starfox and because it was wellmade besides the no play and replay buttons, but it was also funny like the monkey head and so-on, it did loop so you may want to fix that...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code and propper play and replay buttons so it dont loop, but other then that its fine...

~~OVERALL~~
Starfox parody with some really good art about it...

~X~

[Worm Attack]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well this was cute, made me laugh at the end, now where he got tht gun i dont know but all i know is it was funny, so nice work on making something original and with humor, and with subtitles which alot of people dont do so nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is so leave it, maybe make a series out of it...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute worm...

~X~

[Danny's Batman: Episode 1]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
I think i saw the 2nd one recently and i seem to like this one better, maybe the drawings that looked better, but anyways it was funny and th ausio really drove it, i still think there should be some "COLOR" even if its here and there, anyways nice short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit of color...

~~OVERALL~~
funny batman audio, and neat b&w short animation...

~X~

[Frankenstein Jobs: Clerk]

((( HSHA GOOD STUFF )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was perfect, it was short but perfectly presented and set-up, it would have been nice to see the jpeg art instead of jpeg, and maybe even have the flash plot into other scenes and such, anyways funny short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more scenes, maybe even more people asking frank stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
Frank at 7/11 LOL...

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[GG - 11/25: Starberry]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i dont know about the whole gg days but this did make me laugh, allthough the animations and art were slightly sloppy but it has room to be improved, also lower the filesize thatw as just abit much...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lowering the filesize would be a start, more effort and detail on characters to backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny random, and silly, but thats what makes newgrounds go around right hehe...

~X~

Starberry responds:

4:00 AM Turning over in bed In the darkness The twinkling of stars
I push my way, swimming through tepid sheets
Pallid A flash A tear-bug 1 Hide-and-seek
The entrance to dreams It can't be found
Is it OK yet? Not yet!



Always whenever I'm shaking, I'm wanting to live
And nothing more than that
The azure flame It burns on Until it becomes a star



All alone The new moon
The flower guardian is (playing) Hide-and-seek
Rain is falling on the continuation of the dream
Is it OK yet? Not yet!



This vast sky, In your eyes, What colours do you see?
A bright despair Keeps running through my chest

In the midst of the light? In the midst of the darkness?



From the beginning, there?s been nothing Yes, nothing
Because of that, the entwined wind slices through my mind
In the act of seizing it,
This second will immediately leave
Always whenever I'm shaking, I'm wanting to live
And nothing more than that
The azure flame It burns on
Until it becomes a star








oh and why are you reviewing this god awful old thing

[Herbert and the Mountain]

((( NICE CHARACTERS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very good especialy the "CHARACTERS" lots of detal and good color blends, anyways as for the flash it was very smooth in animation and nice art even the backrounds, as for the story notbad at all i was really into it so nice work indeed...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything i could see would be some subtitles but thats about it...

~~OVERALL~~
It will make you lagh with its humor and make you take a second look for its awsome detail...

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