XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Street SkateBoarding [BR]]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, actually its better then most "SKATE" Flashes since others were just stick based and b&w as for this you made a real character and had great use of color, and some neat backrounds, aswell as some neat tricks, so nice job, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stunts and maybe some other skaters in the backround...

~~OVERALL~~
A welldone skater flash with some good use of color...

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[Still In Love.]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad sortga like a music video, first off i would suggest add some "SUBTITLES" to the clip, as it would improve it for the viewer viewing pleasure, but anyways, the art was decent kinda neat actually, but the "MOUTH" animation could be better looked funny, anyways nice animation, hope to see more from you soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better animation with the mouth, Voices were not bad Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat music video with some neat characters and funny story to it...

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[Inglor Collab]

((( HMMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well for one its too short, arnt there supose to be a few clips?? it was odd and strange, aswell as a strange audio for the voicing but still it was entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content and clips...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but very short, kinda ended befor eit started...

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OgreClock responds:

THIS IS A FREAKING COLLAB, IT SHOULD BE ON FRONT PAGE!

[Daily Short]

((( SHORT BUT ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha well it was short and did entertain me somewhat, you should add this to some colab instead of by itself, might fair better, nice artwork and silly humor, just needs more content to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add the short to other shorts in one big flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but way too short...

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Frostbreath responds:

About damn time you gave me a review.

[EleMental Eps.1 (beta)]

((( NICE EFFECTS )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i mus say this did have some nice effects very flashy and well presented,a s for the sticks i supose they are ok but you should think about spreading out your skill and put more effort into the characters...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the
character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat effects and very flashy lots of good action, not a bad stick flash...

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[here kitty...]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha well abit on the short side but it was funny, could have taken it into other scenes and such but still funny and also abit random but thats the best part of it, you should make more shorts and put them together, anyways nice animation, it made me laugh...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny short with a cute kitty who likes blood...

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[Do you like Fairies?]

((( VERY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Funny but way too short, not enough content to get whats going on, maybe add more to it or add more shorts, it did however have some nice "ART" like characters and backrounds, just needs more content...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content to the flash, and much longer, aswell as more scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but way too short...

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Lalo responds:

its just a friggin short not a movie feature, calm down

[Electricity Short]

((( TOO SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha well it was very short, but you have a good idea on it, the "ART" was neat and while the character was abit simple it was still neat, just the animation was too short, it was funny so i liked it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to it, as it was very short, also the backrounds could be abit better...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat dark and entertaining needs to have more content and could be longer...

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[Hamstring MG4]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i had to give this 10's not sure why maybe the "HUMOR" maybe the silly story and animation but whatever the case it made me laugh very entertaining, just work on the "SIZE" somewhat, anyways nice animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k...

~~OVERALL~~
Silly funny and good humor...

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[A Teen's Story]

((( ABIT SHORT BUT OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok, seemed abit short, and lacke din backrounds, but you did present some nice art detail like with the main character and all, also lacked in backrounds thats something you should have had atleast a base color besides the white, anyways it was a funny short flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland... All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble... I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A short f and backrounds...lash with some good skill on detail and characters but could be better with time

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