XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[EMO STICK]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok that was funny, but i think you need to put abit more effort into it next time, it was about 3 seconds long just not enough going on, and no backrounds either, seems like it was just a waste of space, the stick was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well, a story, character's "EXPLAINED BELOW" and color for sure, The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Short emo something about 3 seconds long i didnt get it...

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[Curious George W]

((( ABIT BLAND )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat but abit bland, like on the backrounds, "WHITE" as for the george character well he was funny, but needs more detail, also work more on the backrounds kinda ruins the whole theme and all...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better detail like in the backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny geaorge, parody lol...

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[Massacre: Murder]

((( NEAT FLASH )))

~~REVIEW~~
I can understand why most people confuse this with madness stuff, and you probably know, the grey tones the circle heads, but yours are not exactly the same and have some decent design to them, it was actually an ok animation, just to much like madness, that and the fact its 4.5 megs which is never good, anyways nice work, abut different style of characters next time to avoid the confusion among newgrounders...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Different style characters, and compressing is needed >>> The Filesize was massive almost killed my machine, i use 56k and im sure alot of other users do aswell and something to think about when making really big flashworks and the filesize is that big think about the user abit as they might not beable to download as some people may be impatient, compress it abit or cut it down somehow but remember that alot of us use 56k...

~~OVERALL~~
Like madness but thats just the confusion, but really its a decent flash...

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[Daily2oon SE: HENTAI SIM]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was funny, the flashing was abit much, and there could have been some more effects besides the flashing even some wacky music to go along with which i didnt hear this time but it was still funny, so nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes and some music aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining besides teh flashing lol...

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[Lost Rhapsody]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad kinda neat and funny aswell, im not such a fan of the lost show but have seen a few episodes, and i think you did a good job to represent it and a neat feel to it, the filesize on the flash was very large...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the filesize somehow maybe due to the graphics...

~~OVERALL~~
Fun little or BIG tribute to the lost show...

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[Friend on Fiya (prm bday)]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, i kinda laughed with it the character design was abit simple, but you did presemt some good voicing for him, i would suggest some "SUBTITLES" for him though, the flash it self tends to get abit boring it needs more pazazz, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More humor to the character and some subtitles could improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny character good voicing, but needs more humor to it...

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[MisFate Trailer]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, but seemed abit short, it had some very impressive artwork but not much on the animation, and it was basicly 3 or 4shots, it needs more content on the full version of it and especialy more animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well to be a good trailer it needs to have more detail and more info on the full version, while its a trailer it should be short but still give enough scenes, story plot, and characters info and give the viewers something to want to look forward to the full version.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit short but has some nice artwork...

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