XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Project Reaper]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit simple, and while its just sticks you could have made some nice characters instead making the fight scene abit better, but it was neat, and some nice music to go with just needs more effort and detail on the characters...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More character design would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
A basic stick fight with some decent music to go with...

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[The Only Dragon]

((( INTERESTING SPRITES )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha the sprites are funny, you could go to the flash forum for some help, but one thing for sure is that you need to lower the "FILE SIZE" that was just way to big, but as for your first flash its a start just needs better understanding of flash and sprites and some compressing, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Sprites lol...

~~OVERALL~~
A funny learning flash sprites lol...

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[Scary Flashes]

((( NEAT BUT ...??? )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha well it was way short so i didnt get to enjoy it for what it was, but its ok, the art was cool, and you added a few scary moments but not enough you need to have lots even from the classics, but make it longer for sure...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer, and many more scary moments...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash but has the right direction of a good flash...

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[Nail]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad kinda neat music that seemed to flow well with the very smooth animtion, and the "ART" was very unique aswell, it all seemed to just flow together very well which was neat, i enjoyed it, hope to see more like it soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some different colors like with the backround, would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth animation aswell as some nice artwork...

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MorrowDays responds:

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[CrazY Heroes]

((( AWSOME )))

~~REVIEW~~
Very good stuff here, but the massive filesize got me took a good while to finaly get to it but i must say after all that it finally did load it was nice to see some nice graphics and smooth animation, very nice indeed, keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just lower the file somewhat...

~~OVERALL~~
A big file but after its loaded and you seen it you will not be disapointed, nice job peoples...

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[EMO STICK]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok that was funny, but i think you need to put abit more effort into it next time, it was about 3 seconds long just not enough going on, and no backrounds either, seems like it was just a waste of space, the stick was funny...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well, a story, character's "EXPLAINED BELOW" and color for sure, The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Short emo something about 3 seconds long i didnt get it...

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[Curious George W]

((( ABIT BLAND )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat but abit bland, like on the backrounds, "WHITE" as for the george character well he was funny, but needs more detail, also work more on the backrounds kinda ruins the whole theme and all...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better detail like in the backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny geaorge, parody lol...

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