XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MDay : 30 Minutes]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, made me laugh and there was a few different things in this which was neat, the "TURTLES" were funny as hell, my fave by far, you should lower the filesize somewhow though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compression...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animations, turtles are funny...

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[Rivercity Ransom: Ep.1Nam]

((( NEAT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, i did think the "WINDOW SCREEN" was abit small, you did have some good action aswella s the "SOUND/FX" but you should have had some audio for the voices to go along with the text bubbles, anyways good animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff... and make the window size abit larger...

~~OVERALL~~
Good sprite battle action and funny....

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[guard I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting kinda cute actually, the "AUDIO" seemed to get abit anoying after abit, but i was impressed how it all animated together kinda neat, hope to see more work from you soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the "WINDOW" larger it seemed abit small...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and interesting but entertaining, so notbad...

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Ooli responds:

thanks for the review. I made the music stopable and will keep the others comments in mind for the part 2.

[GG - 11/25: InhalerGlock2]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i like the different clips, and some ok art but clearly could be improved with some detail aspects and much more effort, needs more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort and detail all around...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but lacks effort and detail...

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[Breakfast In Bed]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad for your first animation, but you should compress it as much as you can especialy for your first animation, there was alot of shaking going on which was notbad but could be much smoother with more time, as for the art it was ok could use more details though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
A first time flash, notbad but could be better...

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[Phantom Of The Sticks]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad, it was entertaining, allthough you should think about something more then just sticks, something with more character feel to them, anyways nice stick animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining stick flash, could use more to the characters and the backrounds though...

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[END OF DAYz II EXTENDED]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, but could be somewhat better, like with the animation, it was off and on at times, nice art detail and interesting theme, also the file was abit much, lower it abit...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the huge file...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash, but could use some compression...

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[Pat Fitzstephens Tribute]

((( NICE EFFECTS )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat, and i noticed some really nice effcts, and color use, made the animation more worth while, and there was 4 good clips not crapy ones so very nice on this, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add another clip or two...

~~OVERALL~~
Good quality colab clips with some funny random scenes and good effects aswell...

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