XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Total Randomnes-ss]

((( STRANGE AND RANDOM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha i really liked this it was random and odd but yet so funny gave me a few chukkles, i really enjoyed it though, the sticks seemed to fit perfectly with this, allthough the white backrounds didnt, anyways funny flash animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland...

~~OVERALL~~
Very random but very funny...

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[Secret Episode Special]

((( ENTERTAINONG )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it could use some work, mostly in some compression aswell as more effort and detail something that makes it standout or something, it was funny though and had some decent music, more effort is needed though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort on detail, and compression is needed...

~~OVERALL~~
Lets just say the best thing of this i liked was the music, lol...

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[Jedi intro]

((( SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well eventhough it is an intro it was ok still too short, needs more scenes and more ships, also it seemed abit laggy, maybe due to the 3d like style, but it was not a bad intro, hope to see more on it soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content more scenes and more ships...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short intro too short if you ask me...

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[Random Sprites]

((( CUT THE SIZE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well you asked whats wrong well first off it would be the Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The size is a start, and more sprites aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
An ok sprite flash could use some compression though...

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[Three's Company Teaser]

((( FUNNY AND SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny and neat, the characters were abit odd but that was good, you could give them some more shadng in there body and faces, i thought the toon was abit short, and also at times it was hard to hear or understand whatw as being said, maybe some subtitles could help...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shading and detail in the characters, more scenes, and more story stuff, All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters, and a short animation but sorta funny, nice job...

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ClusterLaw responds:

Yea, as I've nearly completed the first episode I've improoved my animation skills and before I start working on the second episode I will first go over the character details and improove them all. Thanks for your feedback! Be sure to watch episode 1! It's alot better.

[The Elite Koopas]

((( CUTE BUT COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually good and entertaining, it could be better such as taking it into other scenes, and giving mario some voices, also make the text much bigger it was so small i couldnt even see it and it went fast, but not a bad flash if i say so...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the text abit larger, add more different scenes, while there was Text bubbles this could have been much better with some voice dialog of the characters it would be much better then just having to read a bunch of stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
Good sprite animation, and funny could use abit fixing up though...

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[Story of Emos]

((( HA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ha this was great, it is neat how it plays out sometimes just like the real emos of the world haha, you could add more detail to the "CHARACTERS" and some compressing of the file would be nice, but overall notbad for your 2nd flash, hope to see more in the near future...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail in the characters and flash itself, Try and compress the file size nobody likes a large movie some people dont even watch a large file, so in that aspect your draw away users from veiwing your work, so a little compression would improve on this...

~~OVERALL~~
Good 2nd flash but needs more effort, nice idea though emos haha...

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[Mazinger Intro]

((( HMMMM )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this sorta looks like it was taken from tv and just placed on flash???? but whatever the case it was a nice animation, allthough i didnt understand a word that was said maybe make an english subtitled version...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs "ENGLISH" subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation verywelldone whoever did it...

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[Caps Lock]

((( LOL FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny and did make me laugh, i was more impressed with the "ART" sch as teh character and animation and such a great angle of viewing, anyways a decent animation and funny, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny toon with decent artwork...

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[Daily2oon SE: UglyBastard]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
I cant seem to get enough of these, abit random but funny as hell and this flash was actually better then alot of others, nice animation very amusing and entertaining, nice work peoples...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some compression but it was not that bad...

~~OVERALL~~
Another toon by the daily bunch haha...

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