XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FrozenFowlClock ep.1]

((( KINDA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda funny, i noticed with the "CAR" the clock rims well in one scene they were just blank might be something to fix later, anyways it was entertaining and notbad of a plot, and glad to see its on more then just one scene so this did show some effort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much it was ok...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent clock flash...

~X~

[Shamoozal: Black Friday..]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, it had some "SMOOTH" art and animation, and the character had real personality, the flash seemed really short though seemed like it could have had much more to the joke or story, and also some nifty "SUBTITLES" would have also been neat, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer with more content, aswell as some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny audio and neat artwork, i really enjoyed it as should everyone else...

~X~

[Eugene the Penguin]

((( KINDA CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well the artwork was abit simple, but the characters were notbad, it was all sorta cute with neat characters, but it does need more detaled effects like in the backrounds and characters aswell, the "ANIMATION" was notbad though, and as for the "STORY" it was entertaining so notbad there...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail like within the backrounds and characters...

~~OVERALL~~
funny characters and a neat animation...

~X~

[Suicide Kills Ep1]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad it was interesting, and kinda different from what i thought it would be, but it was neat the abinimation smoothness could have been abit better. anyways nice animation keep up the good work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would leave it as is i liked it...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and a differrent look on suicide kinda...

~X~

[Emo Days.]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad but was very large in file so you may want to compress it somewhat, aswell as add more effort from start to finish even flashy effects will help, it was just too large in file though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compression is very much needed for this, aswell as some more detail...

~~OVERALL~~
Not a bad idea but needs compression...

~X~

[Basic 10]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaining, the "ART" was so-so but still kinda neat, i do think the backrounds could use more props instead of just the colors and such, anyways nice try at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More props and detail in the backrounds and the characters aswell...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining but needs more detail and effort...

~X~

[Eggo]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was funny but was very short and somewhat very yelloe which was kinda neat hehe, anyways it could be longer and with more scenes, more characters aswell...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer add some more characters, and more stuff going on...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short and very yellow...

~X~

[An Unusual Day]

((( CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL well it was cute but very short, maybe add some better character work aswell, i did think the music was a nice touch, but just too short, anyways nice cute animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more to it, more stuff, and even some characters with more then just a stick design...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but way to short...

~X~

[Fred and Frank: Portal]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaing but, in my opinion i think the "MUSIC" was way wrong for this, it didnt flow like say abit slowr music might work, and the characters do need some work, aswell as more content with more scenes...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content, more svenes, a change in music and some character work...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but needs more to it...

~X~

aiken-at-ng responds:

i agree about the music but this was only a polot cartoon. i migth release fred and frank : the portal (V2) one day