XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spriting tutorial]

((( NOTBAD BUT COULD BE IMPROVED )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was notbad, kinda neat, but it was abit sloppy like with the design of it, and also maybe its me but i didnt hear any music or sound/fx which would have made it more enjoyble...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some sound/fx and or music...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent sprite tutorial...

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[Black box Of Death]

((( GOOD ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
Kinda like a music videeo, i like how it all formed together but you had some nice music to go with, and the scene selection was decent and a nice idea, it was an ok music flash, make more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Smoother animation would be a start...

~~OVERALL~~
Nice music good animation, kinda like a music video...

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[The Unluckiest Blob]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad but seemed abit short, i do like teh extras but it wasent much more, the stick was ok and funny as was the flash but it needs more content...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The stick characters need work, so i would suggest giving them more detail besides the stick themself such as facial features eyes mouth and hair animations, maybe some shoes pants shirts and so on, to make them different then just your avg stuck, it would improve on the character and flash in general... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but too short...

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[Who is shrek]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting kinda confusing at first but got better as it went on, you may want to compress in some parts as it was abit long, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some compression would be a start...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but abit confusing at times...

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[Manganese]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was ok, kinda funny and silly, i would suggest some sorta backrounds besides the white ones you do have, but i did however like the audio it was perfect, anyways nice job keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some sorta backrounds, Add some backrounds besides the plain white one you have, or atleast a base color so that it doesnt look so bland...

~~OVERALL~~
Silly and funny but lacks backround...

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[Ichigo, Nigo, Neko! v2]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL haha this was funny, very random and too much "JPEGS" imo, but it did make me chuckkle abit so i was ok, and the music was entertaining, anyways notbad, hope to see more wacky stuff soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles of the song but it was fine...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny music video kinda flash...

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[R&FMV - Floor!]

((( FUNNY VIDEO )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very neat, kinda like a music video but it presented some very good art and even better animation, and as for the "MUSIC" it was very fast and hip really made for a neat flash, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles thoughout the flash as the song is really fast...

~~OVERALL~~
Fast video good music, and even better art...

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stoners-lunchbox responds:

I'm flattered. I might have to make a full version of this music video. I can only imagine the kind of success it'll get.

Thanks for watching!

[merry lockmas]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but seemed to lack something, maybe better graphics, but more characters and scenes aswell, and also i couldnt understand what was being said so maybe add some subtitles it would help alot of people to understand whats being said...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content, more scenes, more characters, Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting, The one thing i find an issue with clock/lock flash's is the "VOICES" always hard to hear or understand whats being said, so i would suggest some subtitles for an overall better understanding of whats going on...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but could be abit better, and subtitles would help...

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SafeClock responds:

Lol, bear in mind this is my first flash, and i made it over a year ago. :3

[Skate 'til You Die]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad kinda neat, could be better though just little stuff would make it better, like the animation portions and such, but it was a neat set-up and i was entertaining, just needs abit more effort and such, anyways nice job, keep at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and better animating...

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but could be better...

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